So far, I love the characters although some of them are irritating. Lol. Anyway, I hope the characters will have some sort of character-development experience!

So far, this novel has a wide use of vocabulary, which makes for engaging reading. The writing itself is enjoyable, with well-crafted sentences that showcase the author’s skill. However, by Chapter 8, the story feels rushed. Events move quickly without much time for buildup, making it hard to fully connect with the world or characters.Speaking of the world, there isn’t much in the way of world-building. The setting feels vague, with little detail to anchor the reader in a specific time or place. This makes it difficult to become fully immersed. Additionally, the plot lacks a clear sense of direction. While some novels take time to unfold, this one doesn’t seem to be building toward anything specific—at least not yet.Overall, while the writing itself is strong, the pacing and lack of depth in both world-building and plot progression make it difficult to fully engage with the story. I’ll see if things improve later on, but so far, it feels somewhat underdeveloped.Another big issue I have is the lack one quotation marks. There is no use of them at all which can make it annoying to understand who is talking, for example “ ” - for when a character is talking out loud ‘ ‘ - for when mc is reading someone’s thoughts But anyway good effort from the author, can tell they care about writing.

Different from other fanfics as the mc already starts with a somewhat high cultivation. Imma let the author cook..........................

This is peak tier story, I'm telling you.The build up, and the fights are really awesome.Characters apart from the MC aren't useless side characters.Overall, definitely worth it. 👍

Now, seeing MC himself contemplating Self,I etc.  seeing it requires comprehension to gain skills not just shouting their name is first towards a real cultivation game, I hope MC doesn't always act like fool, and please improve the IQ,EQ levels of side,bg characters.Mainly cowardice is the result of caution and sometimes in a place like xianxia worlds even then it is required to take risks considering probability(I think in this case Mc should be able to guess it because of his mind) and maintaining caution.Hopefully MC remains intelligent in all cases and all the best to author

Good characters. excellent writing. I like Quilya.

I have been enjoying the story and interaction with the author immensely so far! Baldwin is an incredibly interesting part of the story that I guarantee will leave you wanting more chapter by chapter. The world-building really take the lead though, although the characters are nothing to overlook. Baldwin, the Demon King was unique in that he pursued peace, he was distinct in his wisdom and ability to defy expectations. I highly suggest giving this a read.

Hello, I am Lonelythree and this is the first time I am reviewing my book and want to tell you something.First, this book would follow a mixed pov writing style with a majority in the First person and some parts third person.Secondly, this novel would follow a mix of fantasy, lore, secret groups, evil religion, evil gods, the Academy, and Mc having its followers so you can expect a great number of things.The pacing would be a bit slow and world-building would be crafted phase by phase so that there isn't much info dump.This is my first novel with a serious story with a lot of things going so I might make mistakes but do suggest corrections and remind me of plot holes.Before you form your opinion, I would ask you to read the first 20-30 chapters before disliking or commenting on it.Constructive criticism is accepted but doesn't just give 1-star with no feedback and filled with symbols. Give 1 star but have a say about what you disliked and what can be improved.

Nice book! Keep up the good work. I know creation/writing great book is sometimes hard, but try to update frequently 👌

Nice plot! This novel is amazing, I advise you to read it 👍👍

It's a really good story and I like the writing style 🙂

This definitely got potential. In terms of plot writing, it seems to be establishing itself quite nicely and am excited about the overall world building.Hope you execute it nicely.