The Long Lost Mafia Prince

a fantastic book. just wish chapters were a lot longer

Great Novel. Leon is an interesting character. Layla is cute trying to do spoilery things. Tania is best girl. Plenty of psychopath rampages and drama to keep you entertained.

Finished the Story. Lots of Spoilers.This story has few things going for it but many things against it. The story is 5(?) story written by the author and is probably the latest one. The story was completed just 5 months ago. And this brings us to the problem. How can author with such experience write such a poor story?It's short and fast but the story itself is neither funny nor intresting enough to keep your attention.Pros :1: With 660 chapters it's a pretty short Xianxia and System Novel.2: It has slight comedic elements.3: It's a system novel.Apart from these three I couldn't find any reason to read this story.Cons :1: MCs character is highly one dimensional and conflicting. His behaviour changes with his mood. One moment he is preaching peace and the next he is destroying a whole sect and murdering everyone from the Ancestor to new recruits.2: His motive to gain power is poor. The whole story is poorly executed. Power so he can relax and enjoy? Okay. But here you are trying extremely hard to do so when you could have done it through way simpler methods.3: Lots of plot holes, incomplete story lines and half way buildup. Whether it's the flame tatoo he gets after killing a Buddhist Sect Ancestor or is the Dark god realm. Same way, it's not explained properly whether the Alliance is from other dimension, is one the same planet but just divided by a barrier or they from another planet. It just doesn't makes any sense. Similarly, what exactly is that nine headed bug? Way too many incomplete story lines.4: Cultivation system is shabby? Incomplete? Hastily made? I have no idea what to say. Almost all cultivation novels have becoming God as an end point. Here, it's not so. His strength makes him the strongest but the cultivation realm is not so. Their are many people in the same cultivation level. Thats it 5: The way he earns anger is through thrash talking. There are so many ways he could have earned anger. Vandalism, pranking, stealing...but no, the only way he thinks to do so is through the thrash talk.6: System. It basically converts anger points to cultivation attributes. But it's not expanded upon. It's origin, it's end, its function. Nothing. Above all, after few chapters author just makes up some anger point number to suit his requirements.All ina ll. Poor story.

I have been a fan of this Web novel since it came out loved every chapter it does take inspiration from bigger books but not in a bad way and though the update stability isn’t the best most starting writers and people in general don’ have enought time to write or don’t have enough ideas anyways it is an amazing Webnovel

Love the story and the main character. The first 10 chapters were changed, which is a shame, as it seemed interesting, but such as life. The edit to the first 10 wasn't bad either, so 5 stars!

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There came a crash as one of the groups fell into a prepared pit trap. "Ow!"