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I’ve decided to review this novel even though it’s new and has only two chapters. The storyline got me hooked.Talking about the storyline, it’s quite unique and complicated as it states. The author has described every single detail which makes it easier for the readers to imagine and have an idea of the background setting. You have a excellent imagination, I can say that. Coming to the grammar, there are a few grammatical errors in the chapters, it’s not that it cannot be edited. The sentence structure is fine. Overall, the usage of words is good and is perfect for one to imagine the scenes clearly. The more you write, the more you learn! :) I cannot judge the stability of updates as I think the author must be busy plotting the storyline first. I will vote every time the author posts a chapter! >.>Putting aside the official judgement, I personally love this book. I would recommend this to have a read of this book. It’s complicated and amazing >.>Happy writing!More chapters please~

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

The story is mid/boring. Maybe it gets better as it goes on but the first 50 chapters aren’t anything special. There’s some cliches. Read an hour of it to see if you like it maybe it’s just me

I've tried my best to make the story great with a clear main goal and have wonderful world building and different characters with different styles gave it a try

very good novel.keep on updating it.don't drop it and you will see it becomes famous

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

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I hope you keep writing and inspiration always finds you. Interesting start.

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5 stars because I got hooked on the first chapter. And I LOVE mysterious books.

Early stage of the novel but seems interesting. Almost the same vibes as other OP MC works but unique in its own way. Keep up !!👍