I am the immortal

love to read it again and again ,so addictive

I wanted to like it, I really did. I love vampires with systems, but alas I didn't feel it. By it I mean that compulsory factor that makes you want to keep reading even when you shouldnt. As for world background and the others if I start speaking I am afraid I will be reported for it sounding like a personal attack. As I said I wanted to like it but it was just lacking in substance, the plot needs to thicken and certain events were very transparent and honestly being able to predict the next chapter and the next chapter more than once makes the story lose it's mystery factor that hooks a reader

I cant believe i havent found this until now, its really good, now heres 5 stars                                                           

The story so far has been a fun read, I have finished chapter 9 and will continue to read after more chapters are up so i won't be left hanging. The character is developed well, from what I can tell the mc seems to be leaning towards the darkside but I'm not saying that's bad! We're lacking cold mcs nowadays and this is a good breather, keep it up!

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Very Good continue.                                                                                                                          

So far everything is going pretty well, both sides (Nero, aka. Naoko and the King/other heroes) has been giving enough detail on whats happening. Writing Quality- Although somethings get kinda repetitive, the quality is still pretty good, up to my standards, its alright. Stability of Updates- The author updates this story quite often, I feel satisfied for this part so far.Story Development- This story is more fast paced and if you don't like fast paced then I don't think you should read it; but for me I like it, fast paced stories are my thing.Character Design- The author doesn't fail for designing his characters. So far, every time we have a new character arrive the author explains them in detail, doe sometimes I feel like he does get a bit lazy but I also get lazy in my writing so I really have no complains in this section.World Background- Although the author focuses more on the character development and story/plot, the world background are explained little by little. It is not like some novels where they explain the whole world in one chapter. The author gives us details about the world in some chaps and not other while making things clear and understanding.Overall, for my preferences, I give this novel 5/5 so far. I'm really liking how things are going so far. Every thing is going smoothly for me so far, I hope to see more great things in the future.

Finally found a good VILLAIN Novel where MC is smart and does things all wishes to see. Good World Background development. Better than most of those "villain face-slapping protagonists" plots. Has its own pace which is appreciated rather than rushing to take down children of destiny.