a story like I love them, can't wait to read the rest 🤩🤩🤩 I love this authorI recommend 100%……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………🤩🤩🤩

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Good story start. Nice characters, funny! It has a lot of good descriptions and the story has a lot of potential. It’s fun to read and well written.

hmm  this is a good book it has good character design and writing quality it's good for people who like  things such asfantasy,this is mix of many i recommend  to read this.

The rewritten version of this book feels like a completely different story compared to the original chapters. While the first draft had its charm, the new version introduces an air of mystery that pulls you in. The slow, steady unraveling of the plot keeps you engaged, making the journey to piece it all together far more rewarding. It’s a bold reimagining that feels fresh and intriguing.

Great story, nice flow and detailed well thought out characters, I am still wondering why the author doesn't want to go premium but it's good to build a fan base first and this tale will get it. Keep on writing! As an invested reader I will keep waiting for the next chapter! 😉

I AM HUNG UP ON THIS. WHERE IS THE REST, C' MON

Interesting enough                                                                                                                                   

Well, the story is a good one, looking forward to reading more chapters. I highly recommend.

Newbie writer here , just trying to make something worth reading

send the next chapter bro your taking time

an interesting story that shows both the kindest and cruelest aspects of humanity.