[Cursed Revenant]

It's a good story. Wonderful story, Character building

I could not ask for a better story to read. Kind of wished it was more chapters  per update but nonetheless it is great that there is a daily chapter update.

I was about to comment on chapter 105, but I wrote so much that I said, 'Forget it, I'll post this as a review.' So here it is...I hate this passive type of protagonist who just waits for the bad guy to make a move. Like, buddy, someone already tried taking your life in the real world, but you're just like, 'Oh, if I see him, I'll kill him,' and that too in-game, not in the real world. He can literally summon the undead lord now hell I believe he can summon his entire 100-man undead army because they are soul-bound or some other reason. But our guy here is just chilling and doing his own thing. The only reason he isn't going to get screwed over is because of the plot armor. I understand the plot armor, but don't rely solely on the idea that just because he is the protagonist, everything will go his way. I do like that, no matter what happens, the MC won't be affected negatively. However, he could plan ahead. He keeps saying many have betrayed humanity, but he doesn't do anything about them. He could have formed a guild with future experts to have better control and suppress the 'evil' guilds. But it's alright if he can become powerful enough alone to dominate his enemies.But I enjoy this novel and its smooth sailing story without any interruptions. So, even though I dislike the MC's passive attitude a bit, I’ll keep reading and hope the author changes his personality.

The writing quality is truly solid. The power progression is neat. Need more smut tho like lots more. But that’s just me. Please don’t drop this book

Haven't quite read all of the chapters yet, but I am enjoying this so far!The Good:  We have a unique story and world, and I personally love Mecha!  The ensemble of characters is varied without everyone just being completely reliant on the MC.  I am pleasantly surprised at how good the grammar is for a first novel.The Bad:  Some chapters are completely in bold, others are not.  We have a unique world with a lot of characters, but most of them are missing details, and so is the world.  The plot feels rushed, and some of the character relationships are forced without any sort of history to back them up aside from the implied friendship of Ryker and Lyra.  Basically, stating their teamwork would be unbeatable after assembling a team half a chapter ago is really hard to swallow.The Neutral:  We're missing so many details, but this is your first novel and will be a good experience!  Personally, I would like to see more of the world.  What is the academy?  What is the power source of magic?  Why does everyone seem to know about the Shadow Games?  I get that you have a story in your head and want to share it with others because you think they will enjoy it too.  This is great!  Just try and remember that we can only perceive what you show us.  If you have the MC and his new teammates become best friends within half a chapter, it is possible, but show us.  Lastly, the chapters get automatically numbered, so if the 1.5 chapter is like a glossary of sorts, put it in its own auxiliary volume and remove the chapter # from the titles so we don't keep reading things like "Chapter 14: Chapter 12: Tactical Training"

So I had no choice only to choose

Beatrice looked her up and down as they both stepped out of the car. She truly did think that something about her little boss looked strange. Her observation did not yield fruit. The only thing that she could say was that Hu Lei seemed a little more relaxed and happy.

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