The Elder Lotus

I have nothing to say against the writing quality or the story itself. Its just not what i was promised by the author. Im currently at chapter 180 and so far i dont know why the author says the story is dark and mature. Also the author is emphasizing the whole time that Draco and Eva are evil and villains, Thats just not true, you can say hes self centered and tries everything to increase his power. But is this something evil or just being realistic ? For example when Eva bought the slaves draco she made sure that they live under good conditions. Is this evil ? Another example are the serf players. Draco also said he wanted that they live under fair conditions. Is this evil? Theyre much more examples like this and im dissapointed that the potentional of a good villian story is wasted and turned into a normie story without any special things.

Except translation quality there's nothing worth reading in this trash novel. Specially the mc personality 😂 idk how anyone can rate this story a 5* . Even if you wanted to make a general system face slapping novel atleast put some effort in it , it's just like copy paste and that even in a worst possible manner .

As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review.This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there.I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.

As I scanned, I saw that there were less periods per paragraph that it looks like it was a single sentence.It can be fixed. Also there are upper cased letter in the middle of a sentence.The grammar is not all over the place. No errors and was smooth to read.The story is about an overpowered God who choose to be incarnated in his juniors creation. So if you like overpowered mc with a drop of sexy stuff this is your cup of tea.

Good progress. Continue to post new chapters!

just added to my library., when I read a new novel especially an Original one,  I usually spend time to read up to 5 chapters only then decide whether to continue or not.. well this novel I got so caught up reading it.it's well written and I like the pace or how the story unfolds, since it's only 26 chaps as of now, all I can say is the author did a great job and this novel has a potential to be a great story.hopefully it continues to update and finish this novel... bcoz most of the Original novel I read so far, either went on hiatus or with no ending..

'Did she forget she was the one that she destroyed it by herself '

"Believe it or not, the others I left in the base are barely holding the fort as it was. The ambush we planned wouldn't work against that many Ares or Hephaestus campers guarding their base, so you need more people so we can still have a chance."