your writing style is really something else! it's elegant and beautiful without being too complex. I'd already recommend this novel for the writing alone!

Oh, the story was really interesting. I hope you keep up the good work for this story. It's already great. I can feel the emotion you're trying to convey on each and every words.

Good work, the characters are very fun, the fights are well organized but need more chapters and have some hearts and love I want love in the story 😂

Having supernatural powers like that must be so much work , poor Ivie, but I love how brave she is.I love it, am looking forward to seeing more of the chapters.

This novel is too good among the cheesy ones for romance and all. Gaming has always been a fun part of the life everyone has at some phase and that collaborating with novel makes this moree fun. Creative thinking is the main thing I love about this novel. I love this novel. In childhood, we loving watch adventures and now I love reading this 😌

love the starting chapters, would love to see what u plan out for this🙌🏻

The world-building in the story is so good, and the characters, especially the MC with his silly pranks on his parents, are amazing! 😂 I’m excited to read more and curious to see what will happen next. this time i think i commented on correct story 😂. i should have done this the movement i completed reading, anyway i just love the story, especially MC Jung.

This a pretty fun book. Lovedddd the light-hearted narration and story. The description went hard ngl, fancy fancy words.The great grammar is a nice plus, so I all await for the waifus and adventures.5/5

This is pretty terrible 😔. what could have been a novel concept is ruined by bad writing, incomplete and inconsistent world building, and lots of translation errors.

What an Interesting story,I couldn't help but vote for this book,great character development indeed and especially the world background👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

this is a good novel, the writing, the entrance is very catchy and that's where the true beauty is, as the story unfolds  you get to love the MC  just wish the author adds more drive to the MC  make him more dynamic

Spoiler alert.Most argue the story has a slow development place. I think it needs to be that way in order for this story to have over 2000 chapters. I read 100 chapters. So far it has felt like it has been a solo journey. Just grind get money, get more evolution points, evolve, find stronger opponent, level up. I want more, maybe more romance maybe in the future his undead army will be able to have family of their owns. Maybe his undead will be able to rule lands of their owns. I want more and I think I wont get it until the academy arc starts.One thing I dislike was around chapter 90-100 when he discovered the black tentancles after killing the gargoyles is the fact he was revelead as a chose one. I felt like its an important title and was shown way to early. Give us hints, indirect wording. We were revealed to that word but as readers we truly dont know how important that is in the context of this story. show me HOW GREAT OF THAT TITLE MEANS. SHOW ME HOW RARE IT IS, HOW POWERFUL, should my heart stop when I see that word, should my blood run in reverse? In the future tell me how his enemies feels. I want my feelings evoked. We will see how the story plays out.Overall 8/10. maybe add like romance,sex scenes, like give this MC some reason to live,  give him some real pleasure outside of grinding day in and out. Maybe MC wil have a undead queen from a different planet. Tell me how the other characters feel about him.  I completely understand he is in a rush to get rank 2 but please I hope it doesnt continue like this later in the chapters. The envy,jealousey,hate,disdain,lust,respect I want to hear more and more about that.  I just wish this story was more EMOTIONAL outside of grinding.Also I feel like his undead arent truly loyal so far. There is something along the line of if this beasts is more then 2 ranks above him they wont listen to him. Like I hate that idea but I understand you want to power cap him. Lastly I also hate the fact that he cant cultivate, I want MC to be the best of everything so even cultivators wont look down upon my MC.Author did a very good job at laying a foundational world background which leaves me excited because he has alot of things to explain and explore in the future. Different ARCS.I will review again after chapter 300.