The Last Opportunity to Live

the Novel is great,i dont find any major problems regarding grammatical except for some minor problem including typos that i can found every now and then. story development as the author said in hos self review,a little bit slow in pace,i dont mind if u want tl slow some things to build some set up for future purpose.character design,the characters design are great,regarding their personality tho but u can try to polise ur phrase regarding what kind of situation their get that changed their feeling about mc more.updating stability is good enough as long as u dont drop this.world background,for the world background tho,i really appreciate about your slow pace novel but it will great if u can established some important rules regarding the contract first like is there any time limit for the mission? what kind of gift the curse give him?  everytime i read your novel i always wondering about that.lastly i really appreciate your similar that have quite similar theme with the old good the world god only knows anime/manga,i just hope that we can see more character development from the mc tho,keep up the good work,author!

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This is a pretty bland story where all he needs is Spirit stones and he'll learn everything. It's not very good as a series tbh and it's not that good to read due to its monotonous tone.

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Waiitt! there's something soon wrong with the title. The empress saying his husband killed the emperor? I can already smell NTR.😂😃😂😂😂😂

I have nothing to say other than I love this novel I find it amazing and I can relate to it so well at times so please don't drop............

'Shit…'

He was in the sink as he played with the droplets of water from the faucet with spoons and forks on the tiled floor.