The Last Opportunity to Live

Spoiler alert.Most argue the story has a slow development place. I think it needs to be that way in order for this story to have over 2000 chapters. I read 100 chapters. So far it has felt like it has been a solo journey. Just grind get money, get more evolution points, evolve, find stronger opponent, level up. I want more, maybe more romance maybe in the future his undead army will be able to have family of their owns. Maybe his undead will be able to rule lands of their owns. I want more and I think I wont get it until the academy arc starts.One thing I dislike was around chapter 90-100 when he discovered the black tentancles after killing the gargoyles is the fact he was revelead as a chose one. I felt like its an important title and was shown way to early. Give us hints, indirect wording. We were revealed to that word but as readers we truly dont know how important that is in the context of this story. show me HOW GREAT OF THAT TITLE MEANS. SHOW ME HOW RARE IT IS, HOW POWERFUL, should my heart stop when I see that word, should my blood run in reverse? In the future tell me how his enemies feels. I want my feelings evoked. We will see how the story plays out.Overall 8/10. maybe add like romance,sex scenes, like give this MC some reason to live,  give him some real pleasure outside of grinding day in and out. Maybe MC wil have a undead queen from a different planet. Tell me how the other characters feel about him.  I completely understand he is in a rush to get rank 2 but please I hope it doesnt continue like this later in the chapters. The envy,jealousey,hate,disdain,lust,respect I want to hear more and more about that.  I just wish this story was more EMOTIONAL outside of grinding.Also I feel like his undead arent truly loyal so far. There is something along the line of if this beasts is more then 2 ranks above him they wont listen to him. Like I hate that idea but I understand you want to power cap him. Lastly I also hate the fact that he cant cultivate, I want MC to be the best of everything so even cultivators wont look down upon my MC.Author did a very good job at laying a foundational world background which leaves me excited because he has alot of things to explain and explore in the future. Different ARCS.I will review again after chapter 300.

overall it's a pretty good manga, I'd recommend anyone who likes reading light novels to read this. it's got potential to be a good anime one day

You're doing great . There are very few good Lotm fanfic and this is one of them. Hope You don't stop writing

"Oh okay, thats pretty clear."

<p>Tetapi mereka tidak punya cara lain. Bahkan jika gerbang kastil ditutup, mereka masih bisa menggunakan kekuatan mereka dan memaksa masuk. Kemudian, mereka bisa bergerak bersama tim Lynx.</p>

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