very original idea. hopping for next chapter soon

You, my dear, are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors! Can't wait to read all the upcoming chapters. In the meantime, I quickly previewed some of your other novels listed here and am struggling with which one to delve into next. They all seem so intriguing! Please never stop writing! 💖😘

Writing quality is not that bad, however There are many instances Of Repeated paragraphs and pages 9-15 have what seems like entire pages copy pasted with little changes. the parts that are not copied arent bad. i only read to pay Wall and decided not to continue due to this.

Nice story, It was very admirable to see story like this especially event that happened in the past. Hoping for more chapters

How i wish someone will read my book so ill  take more initiative on finishing it..

I like the story and characters. Its nice.Looking forward for more.I liked the Arin character most.Even pin is nice as well there love is so cuteGood luck

It's a really solid work, I like it. The begining chapters do have some depth to them if you're patient enough

Great story, but I need more chapters, urgently.  Great story, but I need more chapters, urgently.Great story, but I need more chapters, urgently.

Good story. Writing's great as well. Love the first person narrative style too. 👌Added to library

although the part where he was a coach for 10 years never won a match and was still coaching is kinda impossible to happen, it's just a small part in the novel  mentioned about 3 times so don't judge this whole novel from this part it may be kinda shit part but i really like what came after it,the system is amzaing, the mc is good i like that he started on a very weak team and is building it up, i like the tactics, i like the way he dealt with the team in the beginning etc,the only thing i don't like is that the team grew too fast, where I'm at right now the match with Chelsea ended up 3-4 for Chelsea i would like it if the result ended 1-3 for Chelsea i know it's a novel and it's not supposed to be real but i can't help but feel like they should have taken about untill the start of the next season to do something like this if not moreotherwise it's good i like the journey untill now i would rate it as 6.8/10

Haha, I tried to give myself what I think to be a fair score. I just want to warn you guys, if you see this, that there's this irritating guy going around hating on a bunch of author's books because he doesn't like them. If you see one of his reviews here, you'll know who he is; just please read for yourself and form your opinion. As my lovely, intelligent readers, I'd ask you not to be dragged down by people who try to infect and stop people enjoying things they like.

I absolutely love your book, the setting, the main character and especially the skills he has.Keep up the good work.