Monty & Grayson

Nice work author

first thing first, how the f someone with unranked talent don't get seat? where the f they sit before getting the talent? floor? and why the teacher think it can help to motivate the student even thought evolving the talent is very hard, impossible even. the future is just a fking cliche over and over and over and over oh and over.

Its good and I like it personally.Sentencing and paragraphing could be better but this is still better than mtl.I read something like this some months ago, but didn't get picked cuz of webnovely reasons, so I hope this one get picked.

Easily one of the better cultivation novels on here. An interesting thing about the novel is that it tries to break some of the tropes and conventions that are standard in this genre by literally having the MC travel to a different country to avoid cliche arrogant young masters. Even moreso, when the MC eventually encounters a traditional cultivation sect he remarks at how backwards and inefficient it is. Its a bit refreshing to see a story try something new. After a while though the tone changes drastically and while it isn't a bad change, it's actually quite suited to the setting, it does lack a bit of the oomph of the first arc.That being said, the characters are done badly. For all the research on the U.S. culture/political system that the author actually seems to be mostly accurate in, the behavior and lexicon of the American characters is really...Chinese. Other characters are one dimensional and there are also the standard characters who might be interesting for a few chapters only to be forgotten about quickly.Overall, it's definitely worth a read for daring to break convention though it's not the end all be all of cultivation novels.

A classic cultivation+modern novel. Mc is strong from the starting point but not the strongest.Good writing quality with slow paced romance. It was a good read .

it was an okay story. But MC depend to much on plot armor to survive.he should create Wisdom potion or something on the line to increase his wisdom.

Story concept is slightly entertaining, i mean you can read and understand what the author wanted to say but the translation quality simply ruined the whole thing.

The storyline is unique and good, but the imprecise and lengthy writing sometimes leaves readers confused. The character portrayal is not in-depth enough, but chapter 1 is interesting to read and needs improvement in the writing. Keep up the good work author!