This author has smashed it out the park with the phenomenal writing and structure. Cannot wait for the future of this talented writer. Good characters and betrayal seem like the best choice in this web novel. I will be here till the end to see this masterpiece completed

Hey, author here. So after releasing 100 chapters, I came to realise how far I’ve come in terms of my writing quality and pacing. I believe if you were to read chapter 1 to lets say chapter 40, it’s very different now but with that being said, I’m leaving my review on my novel. I will say that the first few chapters are slow but that’s because I’m introducing the world, their motivations, themes and characterisation. Layla came at chapter 1 but Emery and Zafira came later at chapter 3 or 4. Then atlas was around chapter 10+. It’s slow but I believe it’s worth it. Idk im my own biggest fan and critic. But thank you for reading The Broken Paths. I will do my best in writing and staying consistent.Also I will take any questions you have for me.

Whoa! Death. I love this story- just my type. Thank you Yama-2. Will Farci kill Death someday?

A good novel that only requires a few improvements in description and dialogue to make it even better.

Wireless is the kind of book that pulls you in and doesn’t let go. Luna is bold, messy, and impossible not to love, while Kai and Elias bring two completely different vibes of tension into her life. The banter is sharp, the chemistry is off the charts, and the drama keeps things exciting. It’s steamy, chaotic, and full of characters who feel real in all their flaws.

A nice story of recarnation, I must say, after reading around 4 chapters i had to leave a review. Great grammar and nice brutal world. In my library already.

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

Love your story, author. please increase your update frequency especially for weekends, we need food for our binge reading addiction.

Like every author, i am gonna rate my novel 5 stars. I want to give a message to all the readers (well not like i currently have any) that this novel is not about someone who is possessed by a devil or who a devil inside them from the birth. This novel is about a devil itself. The struggle and how a devils live his life in hell. This novel will make you question that the perception we have draw about the devils in our mind, is it really true? This novel will make you connect with different mythologies, you all will want to think about the mysteries. As an author, i want to create a novel which rivals the most greatest manga and anime of all time, One Piece. Doesn't mater even if my novel doesn't look good to all of you in the first volume but i promise you all, the more you will read, the more you will get into it.

I can do way better on my book It just takes me awhile to find my mistakes

Story is slow paced. One chapter daily is not acceptable. Even chapter is not that long. I love the storyline. Requesting the author to publish more or longer chapters. Thank you.

,Shameless  author First book, pls give it a try, and pls give me feedback