Read em... and all I can say is ABSOLUTE CINEMA.Fresh and new..something outside our usual reading thing 🔥🔥🔥

interesting premises, but... background building is a bit lacking, MC feels soulless although, its only 33 chapter, soo maybe I'll update the rating laterone question tho... apakah MC nya korban efisiensi anggaran?

This Story Is Peaki Want More i NEED MOREThis Book Has My Blood Pumping

This is a really interesting story and the writing quality is top notch. I look forward to reading more❤️

Loved the first chapters nicely written. Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Love the setting and composure of the writer. I highly recommend it.

This novel has a truely stupidly awful Mc. He acts like a spoiled 2 year old the entire time and hates all the kids his age for daring to invite him to do stuff with them. That in and of itself is kinda dumb but he spends the whole time like "I wanna be more social"? Dafuq is his plan here if anytime anyone tried to talk to them he just berates them until they leave him alone. It's just so colossally dumb.

It's a good example of how to develop a system novel. The writer did a good job with opening and throughing the mc right into the action but also adding meaning to it. The way the world was explained was logical and made sense, and it wasn't overwhelming it was simple and to the point. Great story overall and ill be adding it to my library's

well well well, it's time for review you shrimp brain. Because there are too few chapters I can't give you a full. But I smell good work from here

An electrifying adventure from start to finish! Dive into an addictive game world, with a well-built system and intriguing challenges. The dynamic writing transports you to the action, with vivid descriptions and a frenetic pace. Eli Turner will guide you through captivating characters and unexpected twists that will leave you craving more!

It's a really wholesome story with romance, drama and action. It's perfect for reading in front of your family and friends.

Hello guys. I wanted to make sure that you guys know a few things whilst you read this novel. Firstly: mc might seem stupid at the beginning or blatantly dumb. However, this is mainly due to his age, inexperience and immaturity, but i assure you that his development is quick and he stops doing such mistakes and becomes smarter.Secondly, the writing at the beginning might seem immature and such, but i assure you once again that this changes and becomes better.That’s it, i hope you enjoy the novel.

One of the classic example of delusional Pakistani hubris