Mortal Bones

dang I really want to read it but I don't have a money does anyone know where to read this for free ? heheeh

this got high ratings so i tried it. pretty good concept, but why do you have info dumps in every chapter? first 12 chapters and what do we got? yes you keep saying that you're a beginner writer BUT you could've learned from your predecessors right? chapters are short. At the end of some chapters you said they're a long one, but that's just because of the info dumps. dang there's even a chapter where he only change clothes and inform us his favorite color which is red and black . and don't you try delete this review . already skimmed those chapters up to 60+ but still, can't really bring myself to read this one. anyways, nice try and learn more.

it's a great book now in my opinion the two mcs had to be in different books because when I was starting to root for the main character, I suddenly had to start reading about another one that had just been introduced to the story which made me stop reading. thank you

I may have only read the trial chapter but I am enjoying the book so far and would like to read more of the book to see what happens next. Thanks for listening

This novel started well, then you have a sharp drop then well again then another sharp drop now i don't really now.At first i liked it it was somewhat novel for me, then the mc started having problems with his cultivation and i liked this too somewhat ( it was a first) however the author has a tendency to waste chapters like the first time he had problem with cultivation was fine, the second time no with the second time we have a lot of chapters where i don't really feel anything like the mc goes from place a to place b and things happen but at the end the mc is still the same. we also have the clones of the mc which are a totally fillers if you jump them you lose nothing the clones also have problems with cultivation so no progress for them at all ( we have DOZENS of chapters on the clones that are totally pointless, the novel has what? 300 chapters? maybe not 1/3 but definitly 1/4 of the novel is only on the extremely boring life of the clones).The clones wouldn't really be that big of a problem but the author only publishes like 2/3 chapters a week so you can really feel those fillers.Still at the i somewhat like the novel even tought the clones are slowly grinding down my rating.

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The story is fascinating and the fact that it is the author's first system story, the author did a pretty good and I enjoyed reading the book. Will be looking forward to more from you.

Jadi penasaran dengan kelanjutan ceritanya. . . Semangat terus gan, semoga kisahnya berlanjut dan gak terpotong, semoga makin banyak juga yang baca, .