20 chapters in and I fucking love the book, I've always loved kingdom building novel where the MC is a Prince, king or Emperor, also the MC is funny, ruthless and he's a child.Good work author, keep up the good work, you have my support.

Will there be NTR The title has the word betrayel so I hope it’s not his wife that betrayed him ?

i am the author of this book . i would like you people to give it a try ...                                                     .                                                                                                                                                           .

The story is beautifully written. As an aspiring author, your skills in writing inspire me. I'm looking forward to seeing how the God duo will achieve their dream. 🙂

This is such a great start to the story. Absolutely gripping! Can’t wait for the next update! Dying to know what other adventures are in store for Eli.

I’ve been conflicted about this author for a while. There are no personal issues or deals between us, but I must admit, their writing style has its merits. It blends a classic approach with a distinctive touch, showing experience beyond what a beginner could achieve. The storylines are absolutely wild—in a good way. If you’re into dark themes, mixed with mystery, comedy, and an overpowered main character, it’s definitely worth giving a shot. If you don’t like it, feel free to come back and share your thoughts. As a professional writer, I respect your choice!

I'm not into gl but this seemed interesting. the opening threw me though. made me uncomfortable. I personally like wholesome stuffs. I'm on chapter 3 it's good so you should definitely read if your fine with the Opening and especially if you're into that kinda stuff. my aro/ace self am too weak I'm sorry 😔✊ i wish I could give a better review I might come back if I'm desperate because this sound incredibly promising.i wish the rest of you reader's luck. I kinda want spoilers I'm not gonna lie 🌒🫦🌘

I'm not going to lie because the reason I came here was because I hoped you could help me by checking out my novel then inform me if it's interesting or not but then I decided to read your novel and I tell you this the novel has a lot of potential but the first chapter is confusing to me a bit and i didn't even understand what was going on, but I could see from the beast manifestation abilities the characters has shown and the chapter of the second title [Mega Planet] it makes me feel like the world background of the novel is huge

The only way I could do that was if you had to do a little more

Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.

A very interesting  read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.

I’d like to invite you all to join me on this brand-new journey. I won’t tell you how good this story is—that’s for you to decide once you dive in.So, go ahead and turn the pages. You might just find your next reading obsession waiting for you.