**************************It's a good start hoping to see more from this book. Keep at it! Looking forward to seeing more!*********************

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

Just from the tittle it got  me curious I wanted to know more highly recommend you wouldn't be disappointed amazing and interesting

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement

my new favourite novel of the year. Please author never lock these awesome chapters

Legit jus a big mess so many problems1. Inconsistent with names he switches the names of the ice girl so much and the sword like how can’t you remeber this. He also uses the wrong name for the eyes saying sharigan a lot 2. Power system is jus dumb he can fight and kill a peak c rank but struggles against a D rank dummy keep in mind he’s like E rank during this and he fought a main character fine as a E- rank while they were D rank so like what3. He jus gets new powers all the time. He jus gets stuff and doesn’t even have like a fighting style tbh he jus does whatever like he uses a katana and its supposed to be like quick and wtv and then he gets telekinesis and starts using daggers and besides that he also jus gets a nine tailed fox out of no where and people jus are fine with it not even questioning how he got it if he’s disowned and supposedly untalented enough to be disowned.4. Next thing is no back story all we know is he is disowned fir being untalented but he improves as if he has no bad talent and as far as i know he doesn’t drink anything besides the mana potion that boosts his talent to grow that much5. Characters jus hate him for some reason and from the looks of it it’s because he got disowned and they jus interact in a boring rigid unrealistic way like ice girl can be struggling to do telekinesis and then jus fight perfectly fine with it in the next paragraph As long as you can close your eyes and mind this novel is fine but besides that it’s jus words and shit legit nothing makes sense and there’s no real story line jus random things to keep it going

Thought I would leave a review here for anyone that is interested in my novel and would like to ask me any questions about it and I would also like to give some disclaimers about what my novel will kind of be about. It won't have any harem because I don't like that stuff though it might have some romance in it depending on how I expand the story. The protagonist will have no qualms against killing other humans or sentient races like elves or dwarfs and will seem villianous and evil a lot of the time so just keep that in mind. Although Roman will constantly evolve he will never change from being something like a skeleton or at least undead and if you are reading this novel then genuinely thank you.

I love how the story progress so far, tho it's a bit rush, I know for sure author of this novel has something in his/her mind. I do not really mind reading something fast-paced, so long as it connects with the small details. Keep it up!

I'm not sure what to rate this, but I see old reviews, but only nine chapters and all that have been uploaded this week, so what happened to other chapters if there were any more

This chapter is a masterful blend of mystery, tension, and subtle character dynamics. The serene setting of The Source of Tao Wetland Park contrasts beautifully with the underlying unease in Shawn’s interactions with Jolie and Donner. The sudden shift in their demeanor—from cold to warm—creates an intriguing sense of unpredictability, making the reader question their true intentions. The introduction of the Spirit Keys and their connection to the Meta Origin Society adds depth to the story, hinting at a larger, hidden narrative. The moment of the blue light flash is particularly captivating, leaving readers curious about its significance. Overall, this chapter skillfully balances suspense and world-building, keeping the reader hooked and eager for more.

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parece que promete, interesante de momento