Hatsukoi Loss Time

Right of the bat i wished that the stoy would be picked by another translator considering the hiaitus in regards to its new chapter releases.The story itself is simple enough as its about a guy from a science-centric world being transmigrated into a cultivation world. he has no special cheat ability to speak of and only equipped with knowledge of pop culture reference and the craftiness of a shrewd ***** jaded by what modern life brought.The world building itself is not concertrate on its lore and mysticm but more on the interaction of lu ming with his surrounding which is more reactive than passive.Character design wise , the mc does get the enough growth to stay ahead but not enough to make it distasteful. they are a lit of recurring characters which are given ample development but the antagonist tend to be short-lived since they’re no recurring ones to date

The author is quite had a good grasp on the story. Nice description of what is currently happening and I enjoyed reading! Best of luck author for the success of your novel! Have a good day!

The book is fire overall, and yall should give it a try,  solid prologue, and has Mega potential check out his other works to, Author has proper writing skills

Well  , I give you a very good rating because I think that there is great potential in your webnovel and that it hides a lot of things in my opinion... I should not be able to give such a good rating because there are not enough chapters but truly, if you continue like this I think I can say without fear that you will be able to keep this perfect note, we will see at the end of the 1st arc

With her teleportation sealed, Bennia can only withstand the barrage of magic coming from Riche until she retired from the game...

The sight of her clothes in that condition caused her knees to quake. Snippets of the evening floated in and out consciousness as she collapsed on the ground, staring numbly at the plastic bag in horror.

"It's alright Angela. No one will find her. My brother and I made sure of that."

" Alright, whew, that is at least one thing I don't have to worry about. Although, it is a little bit worrisome that I can see through my arm, and I'm... glowing?" Looking around at his surroundings he came to a sound judgement, " I seem to be the only thing in here, and Jesus is it dark. I think I'm literally the only light source, which is one of those statements I never thought I would ever have to say."