Echoes of the Seed

Long time ago,there was a gray  magic castle in the monster town.One day,the old brother Monkey and the   young brother mankey were  going to the gray  magic castle ,they wanted to know what was in the castle.At morning,they met at star park and they had a lot of things to take.They had a big baseball bat to take,because if some bad people fight them they can use that to hit them.They had a camera to take some pictures for the castle.They had a torch to see in the dark and they bring some water and food.After twenty minutes,they were in front of the castle.They wanted to go to the castle at night so nobody will find them.At ten o’clock,they went to the castle,but they saw there were a lot of robbers in the castle,so they had to wait and wait.

I love everything about this.Although i am sad to see her die that way with out those two talking it out before leaving for a mission like that.

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No recommended...30 chapter before 40 chapter wasting time...the author cannot make the story interesting in first 40 chapter and only make reader angry and lost interest to story...so I drop it...

Very good. I hope to see more from this.                                                                                                   

Good book, very interesting and exciting plot. The author must have really put some effort into this book, and I hope he updates soon though, hehe. Anyways, it's a nice read.

The story is filled with unnecessary details that doesn’t help with the story progression.I read till 67th chapter but the story hasn’t moved much. My advice to author would be to trim the unnecessary fillers and streamline the story a bit.

I love your work author and hope you keep going and wish you all the best. I hope for more action to be honest but i believe you will do your best :)