it's a good start! Looking forward to reading more!👏👏👏👏👏

This is a very well-written story. It starts slow but never breaks my immersion in the first chapters, which led me to read until C13. I'll be back later for the fluff Ezra and Oberyn bring ;) Keep up the great work, Author  (*u*)/

This is good stuff honestly, 👍 I kinda like bruce 😂😂, but the character development and the world building are kinda moving at different speeds but that's okay, I'll like to see the how it plays out later on

Have already collected this. Such an amazing story, jealous of the details placed on the world building, great character names especially Mirabelle and plot twists worthy of swiping up to continue.

*Romero: Echoes of the Void* has quickly established itself as a captivating read.  Chapter 4's shift, revealing the previous chapters as a dream (or perhaps a deeply ingrained memory), is a brilliant narrative twist.  It effectively resets the story while simultaneously deepening the mystery surrounding Jorn's past and his connection to the Riftblades.  The amnesia trope is handled deftly, creating a sense of intrigue rather than frustration.  Starla is a welcome addition, offering exposition about Romero's history and the significance of Voidrifts and Riftblades in a natural, conversational way.  The revelation that individuals awaken powers at fifteen adds another layer to Jorn's character arc and raises exciting possibilities for his future development.  The world-building continues to impress; the descriptions of the Great Sand Sea and the human continent are vivid and engaging.  The pacing is well-managed, balancing moments of exposition with a sense of underlying tension.  I'm particularly interested in exploring the implications of Jorn's "dream" – was it a genuine glimpse into a past life, a prophetic vision, or something else entirely?  The author has successfully created a compelling hook, leaving me eager to uncover the secrets of Jorn's past, witness the awakening of his powers, and see how he navigates the dangers and political complexities of Romero.  This is a promising start to what I expect will be an epic fantasy adventure.

Propose was amazing. The details was great. The description was great by just the first chapter. I’m gonna continue reading this novel. I think I’m gonna get hooked after just three chapters. HolyPeak

sourcee of thee coveer?? what mannhwaa??

Have you ever swim before, if you can't like me, then you understand once reading this book. I know, readers are quick to judge, but once you read this master piece you will sink in too deep.

Ahhhh waiting for the next chapter. The way the story is developing I'm really expecting a lot. Hope it meets my expectations. I'm specially loving the way the surroundings is described, it feels magical but at the same time frightening..

Will work on getting this done the best way. I plan to make it more unique by incorporating Filipino culture and powers that were not commonly used as reference for fantasy stories. Like the Loom System and Haraya - an ancient bloodline. Along the story, we'll uncover the truth behind its decline and face other bloodline powers which fear its return

Luna Library is a magical tale of magic and God's with a cast of characters you would expect of a fantasy setting. However, there were many story beats that made inner monologuing difficult to comprehend. Alongside the many flashbacks that did not have enough descriptive text for me comprehend, visualization wasn't very clear me either on what I was reading.The story begins and ends (as of the latest chapter) with Sukafu Shiori, our main lead. As she goes through explaining roughly where she is and how characters and objects interact around her, I had this nagging feeling of if there was anything about Sukafu that I felt to root for. I understand she she is flawed in aspects not known to the reader yet, but with her hostile defensive nature to keep people away, I just did not know what to think. Does she think everything and everyone is out to get her or is she just doubtful of everything? I do not know who Sukafu Shiori is, what her motives are, and what she has experienced. I also did not get a sense of Sukafu having a "sarcastic edge and sharp tongue" as her character description says. Perhaps it would have been better formatting to have italics and wordplay to show these aspects more clearer.On the topic of other characters, everyone seems to have a mysterious past. It feels as if I am reading a detective novel without any clues ever resolving. Sukafu's mother has ties with Liberty Belle, God of Hard Covered Books. Sukafu's mother seems like she is bubbly, friendly, and an all round nice person, but she seems to not have parented Sukafu better. She lacks parental skills such as guidance and how to be okay with vulnerability. The nuture is apparent from Sukafu's present stance. As for the God of Hard Covered Books, from their interactions with Sukafu, it sounds like she is but only a pawn in his plans. I do not know if these adult figures want to help Sukafu or use her. I also thought Sukafu accepting that she is now an angel quickly felt out of character.Korraline Belle (Korra) seemed like the most easygoing character dispute her introduction seeming very random. I think she has the most dynamic potential with any character relationships she may run into. I really do want to root for Sukafu seeing as she is our main lead with everything around describing how they affect her, but Korra seems to be the more likable character so far.Before, I still felt very lost whilst reading. I had a moment of realization that it felt as if I was just dropped into the middle of an already going plot. It even took me a few more reads to finally understand that in the flashbacks sequence, it was Sukafu and her mother that lived in a run down bus.The story seemed to pick up at a better pace on ch7. More of the world lore was introduced followed by character dialogue between Sukafu and Korra. The lives of our party also have been threatened with the arrival of a moon goddess that seeks the destruction of where our party is staying. This part seems the most interesting to me and I wish to read more about the start of Sukafu and Korra's adventure.Other things I enjoyed were the angel rules. It gives a clear set idea of how Sukafu will be acting moving forward in the story as to answering my question as to why she does not swear. I also enjoyed the hot dog costume for its out of place nature compared to the impending war.All in all, is Luna Library worth your time reading? Not yet as of now with only 7 chapters. There is not enough substance to keep the reader engaged. However, if the beinning plot points are restructured to help benefit the overall consistency of the story and the direction leads towards more character interactions, there is gold waiting to be dug.Edit:There are now 8 chapters with the previous chapter 1 being split into 2 chapters. I enjoyed the segue from death to flash back scene. It played out more smoothly compared to before.Will update when there are more chapters...

This novel, not biased, have the potential to be one of the best novels on this app. I'm not even kidding, it has the potential to be at least in top 10, if not top 5. Okay, let start with what makes this good. First, the writing quality is peak. You will see little to none grammatical errors, or spelling errors, for that matter. So you don't have to bang your head in order for you to understand what the hell the writing means. The description is very good; it allows your brain to vividly imagine what's going on without you putting much effort to it.Story development? Honestly, I would argue it is one of the best aspects of this book. I won't spoil it for you but the foreshadowing is absolutely fire 🔥. There won't be a lot of info dumps at early chapters and the development is not fast nor slow, just perfect. There is also comedy and humour to lighten the tone so you won't get bored. Character design. The characters are almost life like and you won't see any characters acting bizarre like in your usual cultivation novel. There maybe some cringe stuff to them, but you will definitely relate to most of the characters and intimately understand them, specially the MC.The world background. To be frank, the novel is in its early stages, and if you are familiar with the author other works, then you can at least depend on him that much 😉. So my advice is to read it and see for yourself.Now there are some minor issues as well. But they are nothing problematic. However, one issue I'd like to push to the author is that, will this be a harem novel or not? for me personally, I'd like to be single FMC and most of the readers, from my experience, will also like to agree as well. The reason behind it is that, it is not a smut novel is shgs, this novel is fantasy/action/romance book. But it ultimately is about beast, and I think making it a harem will beat that purpose. On the other hand though, please do continue to write some lemon scenes. I think this much will appease the harem route readers. But yeah, this is it. P.S. if you like novels about dragons, you're in for a ride  (u2060◠u2060‿u2060◕u2060).P.S.(2) Author, this might be selfish of me but please increase the chapter release rate 🙏🏿