Heretic King

Not bat it's quite well Story im just bit disappointed cause we didn't have much event happened also I think time skip jutsu was over use

heyyyyyyyy mannnnn is this story good........haven't read it yet..

Ah, classic. I’ve also had this happen to me before, the only difference being that no one told me that it was an escape show... I’m still waiting for them to tell me that, but until then, I’ve got to keep running from the cops.

Spoiler At the endWriting quality     3.8 out of 5The author writing quality is somewhat above averagehe has not made any large mistakes just some small things here and there so its a cut above average but not top tier.Updates  4.1 out of 5The author has updated quite stable the reason why i put 4.1 is because its not frequent  around 3-4 chapters a weekstory development 3.2 out of 5So the story is intriguing but its quite fast pace since you will read about being in a cave to out on the fields, Then there are several unnecessary other than the MC povs that pops up from seemingly anywhere and then pops back onto Mc witch is in a whole new scenario than when you left him in.I wouldn't care much if it only happend 3 or 4 times but it was like 6 or 7 it quite honestly ruined the flow the story and it felt like the athour was only filling in for the word count had but aside from that if you just skip the povs and focus on the Mc the story is still great.Character Design 3.4 out of 5Now if i had to describe it its extremely vague we get he is somewhat evil and tyrannical but we really dont know what his motives are it feels like one of those superhero villains that has one emotion put into them and we just follow that he is somewhat like a robot except with a lot of anger there isn't any laughter or  being amused or even happiness outside of combat. so MC is a quite interesting character except i wished he showed some other emotions on how he reacts to his subordinates or even thinks just show how he thinks about them cause the only thing explaining them is scheming or cunning war-like.All side characters where basically based on a concept cunning scheming war-like airhead-like reckless this could be good in some cases but when you dont show off the side characters personalityit becomes hard to connect to them.Thought they all have somewhat off a personality but the moment you have a chance for them to express them and understand them a pov cuts it off or some text like going into the future for 30 min.World background 4.9 out of 5it seems like a solid world cant say much about the author seems like he has a good idea on how he wants to build the world as a whole and im okay with it.personal opinion and overall score 3.9 Personally i quite enjoy this novels there are sometimes some gaps of logic in the novel where i have to go back and read the part again but for the most part it makes sense and i quite enjoy the novel.It is a kingdom building, action novel that is based with the Mc as a orcIt puts the main character of this novel into another novel thought this isn't explained that well and Mc background is seemingly from a yakuza/mafia/gang background and he seemed to have had some position there but probably not the highest ranking one cause his anger and ambition seemingly comes from both arrogance and ill feelings towards his former boss.for the most part this is a good novel except some parts it mentions things seemingly out of nowhere and there isn't much of an explanation to why he came into that sense of logic or how we/he got to know that.

simply fantastic it's full of everything action, adventure, romance, intrigue and a TALKING crow! I'm mean come on what more could you possibly need?

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It's been a while since i last wrote a review, but I just had to. This novel is a gem, I love the concept. I love the story the way it's explained, the fact that we get to explore with the mc. The only thing I don't like is the fact that mc doesn't really leave traces of his existence. At least for the legacies or the cultivation manuals he leaves, he should have let his name.

"No, together with my friend, we made this place."