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Hello everyone! Honestly I don't write basic reviews but I have to, I love this book, I love the basic concept of being transported to another world that shows the future of your own world, it sounds like I'm talking nonsense but it makes perfect sense when you think about it, so go for it scoundrel

nice story but i have a question Y not add more suspense?                                                                                            

i love these kinds of stories and and the backstory of the mc is amazing

I don't want to be a dickhead so I will give 4 stars, but genuinely i don't want to give that much but it's your first novel so i gave that much to motivate you here are some of my suggestions 1- Improve the synopsis, it's bad I mean really bad, at first after reading the synopsis I don't feel any attraction or interest to go and read2) Some things are confusing in Chapters you should mention thoughts and speak aloud abbreviations 3) And some mistakes like in the first chapter you didn't mention what race did the goddess suggest, If it's a mystery you should mention it that is, I hope you can take this positively

Highly recommend ! Nice story ! I do believe in reincarnation as well. And for those who loves stories especially with death after life, this is really recommendable.

The number of chapters is low for now but even then I can say that the novel has a lot of potential. The story flows smoothly and there is no major error in grammar and vocabulary. Adding this to my library since I am looking forward to future developments. Keep it up author!  

I don’t recommend reading this novel. Although it started out well, it started going downhill as it contradicts his supposedly high IQ and calculated personality

Hope you like this novel, and in case there are any errors, don't shy away from pointing them out. Wish you a happy reading.

this book is still great but im hoping to see more of musa and his passe in the further future,but i like the plot is not simple and is unique

Keep up for the updates bro! I'm want to see the prologue end, and entering the main story. I have a little advice, pay more attention to the correct use of punctuation in dialogue, especially the use of (,). Anyway goodstory!!

This story is an unpolished gem with incredible potential. The concept is captivating, and the characters are truly unique. I can easily see this novel becoming a top bestseller in the future. However, there are a few areas the author should refine to fully realize its potential. Despite that, I highly recommend everyone give this a read!