Back Door to Another World

amazing ......definetly going to be in my reading list......

The idea is nice but unfortunately it feels like you are reading the essay of a grade school kid. The grammar is … well non existent.

give me the raw link please..,...............,...................................................................................

Short Title:TMOBAlternate Title:猛兽博物馆Status:Completed700Author:Dark EggplantGenre:Fantasy,Wuxia,XianxiaTags:Beast Companions,Beasts,System,Lin Jin didn’t expect that he would cross, let alone such a weird world, where he was respected by beasts. Fortunately, he had a museum of beasts.“Master, this is a half-dead little turtle…”“What tortoise? This is a rare beast pet with basalt bloodline and will be promoted to rank 7 in the future.”“Then what is this shed dog?”“Dog? No eyesight, this is the offspring of the Sky-Swallowing Dog, and there is a trace of Qilin blood. Listen to me, and quickly signed a blood contract to protect you in the future, and you will be invincible

7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way? Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information. Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating.Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it. Story Development  4.5/5 - Dunno. Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original.World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.

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Big fan of your work. My favorite is EVOLUTION:CONQUER. I have big hopes for this novel and love your work. I hope that you can get some art done of him and his daughter please.

Great book, but should capture more of the dugout antics in baseball, like rally caps and stuff. There’s a bunch of videos on youtube of MLB players messing around in the dugout to get ideas from