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ntww12
rathan rated it Rise of the undead
May 14,2025
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Cmon when are you going to release another chapter the week is about to end😭Please release fast😭
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rathan rated it Killing Gods
May 14,2025
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Skyrim sure does take on a whole new meaning with this one. Alright, that was a joke. But on the more "reviewy" side of things, here we have an MC that's (and you guessed it) reincarnated into a world filled with dragons, yada yada. Not being a fantasy man myself, but a Christian, it's imperative that we look past the genre and see what the author's trying to convey.So, the premise seems to be more on the comical side while mixing in that fantasy-type of lore most are used to. Some of the phrases like "DragonHeart" really make me feel like I'm reading a story out of a video game. But hey, when your MC's a mix of different fantastical creatures often read about in folklore, it's apparent that the author's really trying to fill the reader's heart with some adventure tales.How about the side characters? Well, not surprisingly, most of them are written quite well. Reborn in a new world where war's apparent? Here are two parents: a Duke and a Duchess. Speaking of the new world, not too bad, author. The world-building was crafted well enough for me to know that there's enough out there in this universe for you (as a writer) to also explore. Just don't let your imagination run too wild. Lol.We'll end things off by saying that this novel's not on the whole dark side and has some funny quips. If you like heartwarming family bonding as a beginning trope, then just maybe your journey in this novel might be an interesting one. That's considering that this review was written with less than chapters released.
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I have read all 20 chapters and all i can say is peak, maybe the will do it at a slower pace to be honest but i want to read chapter after chapter, really recomended.Dark fantasy, romance, and adventures it does have all i like a must read for everyone that wants to try new writers
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Great novel, the premise is greatAs of now(chp 11)A few things to mention There are potential but they are not important as it seems it can be increased by training or evolving The grammar is not bad but there are a few spelling mistakes( it nothing to big)The novel is set in the past and from what I can gather it nether our world or the Pokémon world( it called Gaia it similar to Pokémon world but not the same I feel like)The mc is the 10th son of dukeIt seems like he is hiding his potential(they think he is average not bad) at the start which I do not like but at least he is not like those protagonist who get stepped on
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This is an intriguing book. It has the basic characters and the story feels real and not just baaoc like most stories.  The author did a good in compiling this story.  Good one author.👌👌
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I wouldn't lie, at the start of the story I was impatient because I felt those reasons behind why Charlotte was here in the strange world was long, I saw the importance of her backstory needed. but I still feel it would have been revealed latter in the story. But I'm impressed!i want to open the locked chapters because of how interesting you weave your words. What makes me amused is the fact you keep changing Alpha Jack’s pack’s name. I love it.😹
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rathan rated it Accidental S-Class Hero
May 12,2025
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A/N: I rate my book 5 StarsEren: Shameless Author indeedA/N: I hope I'm not the only one using power stones on this novelEren: You definitely areA/N: 😭😭
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A brilliant start, good flow of story and excellent character design. Though the numberof chaptersare low at the moment,  the storyis going in right direction and shows good potential. Highly recommend.
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rathan rated it Labyrinth of Reflection
May 11,2025
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STOP WRITING. STOP WRITTING. EAT FOOD. BAD BOOK
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rathan rated it Contractor of Void
May 11,2025
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good book loved the concept and the character
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rathan rated it The Broken Glass
May 11,2025
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This work is DIVINE, it is possibly one of the best works on the subject, She is Dark and delivers on that, something I like is that the author does not forget things, there are things that appeared in a chapter and later on they prove to be useful or complement another explanation, simply an incredible work!
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