I’ve read up to where it is currently, but from what I can tell so far, it’s very good. The world is genuinely thought out and the characters show real emotion. Of course there are some tropes, however that seems to a major plot point the story will revolve around. There are very minor grammar errors around the story but nothing large enough to justify a lower than 5 star rating. The only glaring I see right now is the update schedule. Creativity is hard to come by sometimes though so I have that a 3 for now. No issues anywhere else though. If you’re similar to me and you like reading reviews before starting a story, you should definitely give this story a try. There aren’t many chapters currently, but I’m sure you might enjoy it.I hope this review will give the author a little motivation through this story. :))

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The story so good ! it worth to read guys don't worry

Just gonna say wow on this .. this is very nice especially the character design.... It's well structured . Just wondering where this book is heading to😂

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Beautiful concepts. I really want to see where this go.

okay, im just going to give a good review because ill give u the benefit of the doubt for the future but objectively this is a 2/5. the pacing is all over the place, the descriptions are jarring. its just very poorly written. i really think you should study the basic conventions of good storytelling if u genuinely have a desire to progress ur writing skills. theres just weird info dumps+ lack of info if that makes sense and things are just well written. please study some more man before jumping into writing. although u might think its great from a reader pov theres just so much that doesnt make sense. def an improvement from ur previous works tho

The first chapter set up the tone pretty well, it was pretty serious and the mc isn't foiling around, he reminds me a bit of Gilgamesh from fate.The writing is also pretty neat and the use of fancier words have been used here and there, so far have potential and I cant wait to see more.

I Became Transcendent is a thrilling story about power and will. The protagonist's unstoppable rise, combined with exceptional intelligence and determination, makes for a satisfying read. Perfect for those who love strong character development and epic transformations!

I MUST SAY YOU OUT DONE YOURSELF MANElf princes was good but this is on another level Now it is one of the best novels i have read so far .

Shameless author here. I know some are going to look at me giving my own story a 5 star rating as biased and you would be correct. But this will be the best book I have ever written so I think a 5 star rating is fair. No need to bring up this is the only book I have written. Anyways here a few things you can expect. Interesting MC - Ayato is a young man with a bleak and sometimes cold outlook on life however he a sense of humor not to mention the will to use every dirty trick he can to not only to stay alive in this dystopian world of his but thrive. Overpowered MC - yes and no, yes in the sense Ayato will grow and become strong but I would not necessarily say he will able to just one shot all of his enemies Romance - perhaps, I do plan for there to be romantic interests but don't know how much of emphasis I will put on it just yet.Harem - Nope, I dislike this trope. Ayato will only be in one relationship at a time. Updates - I plan to update at least three times a week, maybe this will move to a daily chapter if enough people seem to like it. If you have any questions you can leave them here. Thanks for reading.

This is a well writeen story love it :)