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Minx_999
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Lovely novelšā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø money spent worthed ā¤ļø every chapters full of excitement i am so inlove with this novelšššthank you for this wonderful storyš
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The plot of the story was very enjoyable read! š¤I was hooked from the start by the intriguing premise and the author's vivid descriptionsš
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Love this storyā„ļø. Cant wait to see what happens next.
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A pinch of writing quality and a sprinkle of vocabulary then this novel will surely give the best. I hereby say that I enjoyed my reading and could not wait for more. A unique world where afterlife is not heaven but another world of itself. I could barely contain my excitement to finish this one so hurry up and write more.,......
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Fast paced interesting novel . I live it. Great work here author.
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Shameless author review here.This is my very biased opinion about this book. I strongly believe it is the best book on Webnovel.I put a lot of thought and hard work into this book, and I am certain that once you start reading, you won't drop it. If you have any questions about my book, go ahead and ask, I will answer.
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As the author of this book, the plot is pretty incredible I must say. I have written lots of stories on other platforms, but this is among my favorites. Travelling in between two different worlds while engaging in mind blowing adventures, face slapping, and dare devil missions is definitely the best way to live. This is a ride that would keep you excited.
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This is a good novel so far, above average for the genre in my opinion except for one problem that I have. I think the conflict developing with the military is a bit dumb. My first issue is, why would the military behave this way? I understand the mc, in my mind heās basically a feral animal right now, he feels cornered by the world and like he canāt trust anyone but Charlotte, itās really good and Iām enjoying it a lot. But this military thing could have played out a lot better, firstly we already know the doctor is working with the military as an informant right? So instead of kidnapping his sister like a bunch of idiots and 100% guaranteeing an antagonistic relationship with a future power house, all they had to do was tell the doctor to tell Arthur āIām sorry but our treatments are not working, with the current technology and medicine that we have your sisters prognosis is approximately 4 weeks. However if you are interested, I have a friend in the military and they have some advanced treatments that could give her more time or be more effective in treating her, if you want I could talk to them for you. I have to tell you though, Iām only saying this because I can see you are a beta tester, this isnāt an opportunity you can buy with money or influence, I donāt know how strong you are but the military is looking for exceptionally strong beta testers. You would have to prove to them that you are worth the effort and investment but if you are strong and show your value, I am positive that they will at the very least be able to give youāre sister more time.ā Any military tactician would have approached it more like this, the doctor is already an insider, instead of doing stupid stuff this would have made Arthur hungry for their help, he would be scared and not trusting but with no other choice he would go them and to make sure he doesnāt lose out on the chance to save his sister he would show them more of his power. Now thereās lots of ways to tweak this to make them fall out later and become enemies, have misunderstandings or whatever if you still want conflict to happen. But to me this is would have been a much smarter approach from the military and makes a lot more sense. Still loving the story so far though!
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Common Author! Let's continue the story, please
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absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Authorš„
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The tension right from the first chapter was thrilling! I am a huge fan of action stories and this is a great one! Loving it so far
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