i like the concept but from what i see the updates where a bit unstable. i think that this is the author first book becausae of the dialogue were a bit clunky

For the 17 chapters I've read so far, the story is quite interesting, especially with an African main character. Unlike many football novels where the protagonist immediately moves to Europe, this one starts in his home country, which adds a refreshing touch—even if, for now, it's just youth football.The author attempted to incorporate romance, but personally, I found it cringeworthy, and even he admitted it. Typically, a football novel with a system features an overpowered protagonist, but in this case, the MC hasn't won anything yet, which is a surprising twist.Overall, I'd recommend giving it a try—at the very least, it's a fresh addition to the limited number of football novels out there.

honestly this is good, especially the plot actually kept me reading, I can't wait for future updates

How could I not be interested in reading this? I really like one thing that stands out the most about this book, and yes, that is the cover of this book, my gosh, it is really great. And I was fascinated by the way you presented the city of the future, it was really moving, even though it was a bit lacking in detail, maybe I can give you some suggestions, which are definitely there. There is definitely a plot or some that goes too far back, actually this is not a problem, it makes it more interesting, but because this is brought up continuously, it actually seems confusing. But this is just my suggestion, if you feel comfortable with it, go ahead. Keep fighting my author!!!!

A compelling novel with a strong opening and well-crafted worldbuilding. The writing shows great promise, but clearer time transitions would enhance the flow and cohesion. With slight refinement, it could reach near perfection.

So far, I've read up to 4 Chapters! It's an easy and ultimately FUN read. It has a nice premise too!Please give it a try, you'll love it! Recommend!

absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥

Any good reviews you see are paid reviews that really say nothing about the book (one of them even praises that it's in 3rd person) and every bad review isn't exaggerating in the slightest.To sum it up. Semi-decent world building, insufferable MC and side characters, plot holes everywhere, system isn't even OP, MC takes backshots from just about everyone, any female character is just an object of MC's lust and serve no actual purpose, other characters are 1 dimensional and have no logical reason behind acting like they do, plot is slow and sucks and if you've heard of a webnovel cliche, you'll find it in this novel

I am coming back again to leave a review because this author is my friend and I am trying to support her book as much as I can!! If you like fantasy and then with a twisted blend of romance—-this book is the right one for you! She has been working so hard on this book and it would so much to us and her especially if you give this book of hers a chance! I can promise she wouldn’t disappoint! And guess what? There is daily updates!!!!!Jump right in for the ride and be never disappointed <3 Keep it up girl!!!!

An enjoyable fantasy novel that immerses the reader in a world full of adventure and mystery. The author’s writing style is captivating, and the storyline flows smoothly with exciting twists. The characters are well-developed, and the plot is tightly woven. A great read for fans of the fantasy genre.

we need more chapters from this great novel

The book is good. add it to your library