Tatoeba Last Dungeon Mae no Mura no Shounen ga Joban no Machi de Kurasu Youna Monogatari

I'm fan of cultivation novel, this is one of the good so far I've  read. The story has so much potential. Currently I'm at chap.150 and I wanted give few advice if author don't mind .1. I noticed you skipping 90% of fight just by announcing the result. IMO it'll be more entertaining if add how he defeated hus opponent or how he was defeated in a fight.2. In important fights even try to the give description of the technique, stance how the weapon look like etc3. Add more detail while describing character because it help us imagine the in head. Like what their height how their figure ( silm, skiny, well bulit etc)  how the look like, what they're waring etc.4. If you can then give us a auxiliary chapter regarding details of cultivation realm, like the name of the initial level, grades of alchemist and formation master, also level of the alchemy item (Pill, Potion), array level, weapon grade etc.

Ok so, the story is actually not bad if you want to read a brainless novel with the exact same trope and op MC with cheats ans a lot of girls.Outside of that, dont even bother reading if you want to look for properly translated novel, this is just straight MTL and blocks of text, don’t bother paying and just read in other MTL places.

I see boring sypnosis.... uuuurrrrgggghhh ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) I see comedy tag.... YEAH BABY!!!ψ(｀∇´)ψOnly now I pray that she has a system.Please let this be a system 🙏.

One of the stories I check out every day for updates.There are two things which put me off a little bit. Firstly the extremely long first life (billions of years) and secondly the expectations the title and synopsis create. Because the first life is so long it creates so many unanswered questions which just simply annoys the hell out of me. Secondly the title and synopsis create certain kind of expectations what the story is going to be like and it certainly delivered for the most part. In the later chapters though things take a different turn. This will most likely annoy readers who are expecting things to follow the style of "Emperor's domination".

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It's too early to write a review about background or development and stuff(i gave them 5 kindly), yet i can say 1 thing. The grammar is unbearable. Physically hurts me to see all the errors, mispelled words(even in school, the misspelled words aren't that big of a deal until the mistake doesnt create a new word, with different meaning. Yours usually do. ), 0 sense sentences, absolute chaos in past sentences and other stuff... I am sorry mr. Author but i won't read this story till u edit it....And you can't say i am mean, because i gave you a 4,2 blindly.

I really enjoyed reading this novel. I highly recommend it to the people who enjoy reading this novel to people who like to read system, reincarnation harem novels

I'll try to be honest with you this novel has a big problem with the beginning you should make the main character have an accident with the VR helmet and because of the accident he became the barbarian otherwise it's just too much at the beginning of the novel. another thing that I think it's bad is the contrast between everyone in the barbarian powers because the way you explain the barbarian is like three four rounds stronger than everyone it's just too much you know and are the possible end of the novel he will be stronger too because the cultivation manual so he will always be invincible.