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Writing quality is a 5 apart from the occasional typo or little mistake. The story develops at a good enough rate, giving it a 5. Though I feel the characters are too empty, with not enough personality, which gives it a 3. Updates are stable, 5 for that. World background is alright, though again feels a bit empty due to having only a bit of info, which earns it a 4. Overall, a gem in the dust, I recommend.

I only feel pity for the fl..till 60 parts the story is still where it is..keeping the distance between the leads..but the reason is not mentioned anywhere till now..ml knew only to use fl and torture her...but the author still tried to show he has feelings for fl..but i couldn't believe anyone would love fl this way..can't say much till the story proceeds .

story development can be better, can have more depth in character building and it's  makes better quality story.

I like it. Because it's a Masterclass 20

Great background with the mc. keep it up author.

Good writing, nice pace, and most of all, there is some drama. Even if Zach is a little bitchy, I like him the most. The tension between him and the leader of the group gives me ideas. Keep up the good work!

Hii , I’ve been meaning to write this but couldn’t for the past year , I hope you guys enjoy this as much I enjoy writing this

My favourite work in this genre. Love the story arc and the character development. Really hope auther keeps updating. Was very excited when new chapters were posted after a year.

I want to know is there going to be a second part of it. because I really want to know what will happen afterwards .  I want to see them married .

A new story with from what I can see a promising future. The author should keep up with the good work. The main character is sound but we need to see some more scenes from his past. Anyways, I await the development.

can't wait for the next chapter that's author