This Journey to the West is so wrong!

It really is great and funny in my opinion the update is a bit slow because author have other works it's better to read it in SCRIBLEHUB the update is earlier.

It pretty average.It started off interesting and funny but later on it started to get boring and generic.Story also started to divert from the main theme of the novel which is making wine.

The first part where the MC ate the holy reward kinda hurt, and I noticed some people got mad as well in the comments but I’m VERY glad I kept reading. This has become one of my favorite reads on this app. It’s a comedy-action series, where the MC is basically Saitama from One Punch Man but he actually starts getting recognition slowly. Its sooo satisfying each time as well. Also not just the MC but the side characters are also getting huge buffs by simply following the MC, which most of his companions were enemies or unlucky people that the comedy uses to further show MCs power. All in all it’s a great read.

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The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it. The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking.The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings.The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay.My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.

5 chapters in this is what I can say.Absolutely incredible, the way the emotions are proudly written with elegance, the way the environments are described with perfection, everything is just perfect. I'll continue reading this for the foreseeable future, and I cannot wait for new chapters to come out!TL;DRGREAT NOVEL, MUST READ!

Rising from his show of sincerity, the girl's master replied, "a quality both admirable and obstructive, I am sure."

They dashed out into the green fields, now pitted with craters. Magnler looked back at the city. He could see atmospheric craft diving in, stafing the ground or dropping bombs, leveling buildings and filling streets with railgun fire.