Your writing is quite neat, I will wait for the next chapters, keep fighting!is such an addicting webnoevl. the storyline was good and also the cherecters emotions were chosen vividly. I would live to read more

great novel never seen something like it before I nice take into the basket ball novelsso I highly recommend it to any one who loves basketball

Futuristic meets magic. This is a story I can get into! The flow is good and I find it hard to pull away. Can't wait to read more! Keep it up!

I love this novel, I like that they take their time to suspect each other and fall in love with who they are as people, how much they support each other, Although he is sometimes aggressive, I know it is because of the toxins and the shock or fear of not knowing what he is doing, in addition to his suspicions... but he has never hurt her or underestimated her. I am anxious for the moment when they find out each other's identity, especially when she finds out.

So far  enjoying the book. I don't have a lot of time to read, so when I do it has to catch my attention quickly

The grammar is great, the story is well written, you end up imagining as you read. the start was intriguing and amazing, I recommend the story to any of you

yes guys I too think he can use a bit morre exposer I think this novel has the chance tk grow with the help of right people and right place

I tried but I couldn't go over the 11th chapter, it has the feeling of either a voice writer  someone whose first language is not English, someone trying to write too many words everyday, or some mix of the previous.There's multiple Grammar errors in every chapter, the writing style is seems geared towards teens, with a very strange flow most of the time. it may be MTL.iIhave given three stars to story development because I haven't read enough to evaluate that dimension, but the characters design reminds me of those old Asian movies that every character is some kind of extreme, very obvious and clean cut archetype.It's not like the novel is sooo bad, I've found worse here, but i find it lackluster and not worth my time

"A Masterpiece of Fantasy and Emotion"The Fallen Star Angel: A Celestial Redemption is a breathtaking journey through love, loss, and the eternal struggle for redemption. Carla Vilar has woven a tale that is as emotionally resonant as it is fantastically vivid.From the first chapter, readers are drawn into a celestial realm rich with intrigue and beauty, only to be thrust into a mortal world brimming with emotional complexity and danger. The protagonist’s journey is heart-wrenching yet inspiring, and the love triangle with the rival fallen angel adds a layer of depth that keeps you turning the pages.What sets this book apart is its ability to seamlessly blend celestial fantasy with deeply human themes. The rich world-building, combined with moments of action, betrayal, and tender romance, makes it a must-read for fans of fantasy fiction.The climactic battle and the protagonist’s ultimate sacrifice left me in awe. This is a story of hope, redemption, and the transformative power of love that will linger in your heart long after the final page.Carla Vilar has created a masterpiece that deserves a place among the best fantasy novels of the year. If you’re looking for a story that will captivate your imagination and touch your soul, The Fallen Star Angel is the book for you.

until chapter 19 , its a good ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

This novel is one of the best in beast taming novels, I advise you to read it 👍👍

Your story is very good. If you post more chapters of the novel in a day then it will be more fun.