Traveler : First Journey

Amazing story

Poor quality, Author doesn't even stick to his power system (1)--Mc should have ranked up a ton by the amount he killed but he stays at the Same rank and can beat people 3 or 4 ranks higher, like ranks represent nothing , While other humans ranks higher than him even those he could not beat before some how cant even earn the points he gets by killing a few groups.(2)--Mc is extremely-extremely Partriotic to the point he thinks of his family and China together while he doesn't care if other countries get destroyed or not.And i think they nuke japan when it gets invaded by demons... of course the use a different name like unity country or harmony country something.He even gives a speech of how great his country is which makes you want to vomit🤮(3)--Claims that he doesn't like to hide his power but is extremely contradictory as his rank is basically lower than almost everyone and waits till situation gets out of hand.His personality is extremely arrogant.(4)--Later he promites people to A+rank like giving them candy while still being rank C.(5)--the title of the novel is wrong as he has 110x speed for cultivation but never really cultivates.--Only read if you can't find anything else to read and maybe try searching again before coming here--

As I have seen by now, you have a great reader support as many votes for your works. This means that many were backing you up. Keep improving and writing as you will improve later on in due time. Your story quality was there and plot was complex enough. Making also a cultivation novel speaks that you are a culitivation fan. Good luck on the Spirity! Hope to see you in December! hehe 👍

Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.

Based on the story tittle and story line the story is very OK, easy to read and understand, so it is recommended for everyone to dive into it and start reading...

When I first started to read this novel, I was really enjoying it. The premise was overused but not too over the top. There were a lot of regular cliche's like "trash young master" and "reincarnated with past memories

It’s definitely not a happy ending for LuShen. He’s engaged to someone whom he doesn’t love and who is a bad person. At least for HuiYin, she’s getting someone with whom she has great relationship and who loves her. So for this ending, I can only say that I feel sorry for LuShen who definitely got the short end of the stick.

"Sumeragi-dono, do you truly intend to cooperate with the viceroy's hospital project?"