Whilst there is only one chapter with content currently released I find myself very intrigued as to how the story will progress and it has already grabbed my attention as the characters portrayed so far make for very entertaining interactions.My only nitpicks are the lack of spacing which is a minor issue as the grammar is impeccable and the infrequent updates. (One chapter in 17 posts and not updated for two months so I'm hoping this hasn't been dropped before it has begun, as it truly does have some quite a bit of potential from the author.)

great storyline 🥰, can't wait for more chapters  highly recommended 🥹

Absolutely captivating, I love that he isn't a typical young master and i like the Robin hood early parts, where the familis where robbed lol, the writing is impeccable and easy to understand, keep up the fantastic work

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Amazing 😍 and Interesting highly recommend I just love everything about this novel keep the good work

It's different is a good way; Mafia plot: checkScary MC: checkOverpowered: check (but not in the usual way)Cute child/Family that keeps MC grounded: check

I need more chapters . I'm obsessed with Hardin and Aria  . I recommend this story to everyone . It's nice and engaging . It's a must read 😁

Ngl this shi not for me bro I tried to read it but it was just the opposite of what I was looking for. It has a game-themed element but, all I see him do is kill monsters with his one friend, get money, look after his sister, get betrayed, get his get back, and then more killing. What sets it off is HOW TF IS THIS VIDEO GAME THEMED AND YET ALL I SEE IS HIS EXP ERNED AND 1 SKILL. I HAVEN'T SEEN HIS STAT PANEL ONCE, I don't know what his stats look like, hell it took 18 chapters to even get a basic explanation of his so-called "Monarch calls" Honestly you should just scrap the video game-style theme completely cause it just doing the story a disservice. Everything else is fine grammar, design, and updating but JESUS CHRIST the main reason I devoted my time to this was the overpowered video game elements and a little bit of some op skills but looks like it wasn't meant to be. GOOD LUCK WITH THE NOVEL

very very enjoyable and I definitely recommend this as a read. the writing is also very good and i really like the characters and plot going on

What a comical, fast-pace, and fresh-out fantasy! This story has so many strong points that hooked me right from the very beginning. Nice pacing (Quick introduction to the apocalypse is definitely setting up the stake & premise), MC's personality is full of determination, and he has a great sense of humours (Real funny guy and the system lady.), System introduction is intriguing thus far, his power is ... (No spoiler, please read it yourself).This is a newly fresh-out concept like ever before, unique in many great ways. And the premise of the story = rebuild the world one human at the time!

awesome story. the action is so cool and the characters are cool as well.

This story has me hooked. Taryn and Lucien’s dynamic is so fun, and their banter feels so natural. The mix of action and slow-burn romance keeps me turning the pages, and the world-building adds so much depth without being too much. Definitely excited to see where this goes!