very good START to the story keep it going, story seems built well and thought out.dont lose patience or get bored i want to see this continue.

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This story is off to a great start. The chapters are a good length, and the story draws me in. Keep going looking forward to your updates! :D

Writing Quality - Top notch.Update - So far, so good. Although it relatively new.Story Development - Excellent so far.Character - Well written and designed.World Background - The layout is great so far.Keep up the good work.

okay starting is sad and pretty engaging it's story and beast ranking system is very simple and unique i like it

Hey Author hereThe Fated Rival of the Moon" 40 chapters are completed as of now of review this is my first time writing a novel. If you have any questions about the story please ask and this novel focuses more on Action and World.If you want to know anything about the novel please ask.

I love the premise of your novel i just hope it gets more chapters eventually

This 5* is to encourage author to post more chapters daily. One notification for one chapter is not worth my time. Please consider. Thank you.

I find this book very intriguing. although it is a little early for the review. I can see great potential for the depth and growth of the MC.

The perspective of a beast like cultivation is very interesting, hoping to see it develop, the mc developing and tinkering with cultivation techniques upgrading his own would be supremely cool and the uniqueness of the nanobots takes me back to reading nanomachine, it certainly is a novel with great potential Daoist Author, Do read, and surely hope the story keeps developing!!

A nice book that i can  recommend fellow readers to try. It has some questioning chapters for sure and a lil offensive but if you can overlook it,its an ok work.4.0/5

Could not rate lower.... world's strongest who can't be catch up by rank 2 but was playing slave to association and behaves like some green horn