You Are My Addiction

I read this book around the time when I would never write reviews for stories but looking back this is probably one of the favourite stories I've read on this app. I've always liked stories where the main character develops from either emotionless or straight up ruthless into someone who at the very least is kind to the people who they like. I also liked how everything pretty much tied together once the story reached the prologues time. Cant say that the grammar was always perfect, but I also can't really remember that all too well.

Always being in love with this novel..i'm so happy cause you finally up this chap...Sorry if my english so bad, i'm not practice so long....

This is the second best of this type of novel, and it has the potential of being one of the best on here. I hope that either the translator or the author resumes this story. Top 15 all time on this website, including novels uploaded when everything was free. Top 4 of all time of the type in which the protagonist can enter a hidden space and train: (1) 48 hours a day, (2) Castle of Black Iron, (3) Hail the King, and this one is next.  Honestly, it was improving and I hope it returns.

Interesting concept so far, I've read up till chapter 34 so what is to be said going forward is only relevant up till those chapters.Recommendations to the author:1. Get someone to edit your chapters, doesn't have to be a professional editor. In fact, you could also pass it through an application that checks that type of thing automatically. Some misspelled words that are fundamental to the stories development and world background, such as Devine (Divine). As well as some normal misspelling, like: rediculous instead of ridiculous and their when it should be there. Anyways, those are some ****** examples.2. Fix some verb tenses to match with the correct english grammar to make the story flow better.3. Would recommend an overhaul on your sentence structures to make them "smoother". Example, instead of "It was summer. The sun was hot and bright. In the Wissian town there was a colosseum. In the colosseum a fight is happenning between the two magicians. The crowd is cheering for their respective supporting fighters" It was summer and the sun was shining strongly upon the colosseum located in the town of Wissian; where two magicians where currently dueling making the crowd go wild, while cheering for their favored fighter. Excuse my grammar mistakes, even though I am criticizing I am not necessarily a good writer. I think that if you made those corrections your story would be so much better. Nevertheless, it's a very interesting story which I will continue to read since it has got interesting concepts and . So kudos to the author.

This novels is quite different from most novels, but it is a good and fun read. Without a doubt one of the better novels among the current “what’s new” novels on the side. It’s light hearted and contains a good bit of comedy. So all I want to say is:If you want an extremely serious novel, with a dark mood, where the main character has to overcome countless obstacles to reach the top, this novel might not be for you.If you want a good and light hearted novel, that is well written and brings a few laughs, try it out.

He tightened his grip on his phone. There were a lot of words he wanted to convey at that moment.

Int – 45    Wis – 39    Wil – 11

"We had to give her a name, for registration purposes!" he rushed. "And they pushed the naming to me after I had an entire bowl of espresso? I can go back and change it. No worries."