The story is xGood so far we haven't got to know much about the world just a continent so far and there are 13 of them so yeah. The update time needs work cause there was none last week but he did release 6 chapters to make up for the misses week so I will it's going decent so far

Not bad but could do better with the pacing .

This is a great writing of this concept! I have seen similar ideas but this was well written and has the recipe for an amazing story

If you love a story packed with mystery, drama, and jaw-dropping twists, She's that Unfathomable is a must-read! Kaesu Cadieux is on a mission to uncover the truth about her grandpa’s suspicious death, but along the way, she faces secrets, betrayal, and people she’s not sure she can trust.  This book keeps you guessing, with shocking reveals and a main character who grows stronger with every challenge. It’s intense, emotional, and full of surprises. If you’re into fast-paced, suspenseful stories that mess with your head (in a good way), grab this one now! loveeeeee it!!!!!

I really like the novel overall, but man you gotta work on your writing skill.I know this is your first book, but yeah its pretty decent and worth a read because of its uniqueness.xD

This should be interesting. We can never have enough Idol books, but now a system fantasy idol book?If this continues in its path, it is bound to gain a live-action adaptation soon.

honestly really impressed. I read your other novel- the fairy and the wolf one, and ended up dropping it after 370 chaps. Despite having read the other novel however I honestly can't believe this was made by the same person. It's only 14 chaps yet it has a near perfect start. It introduces us to the interesting main characters, teases us with their complex personalities, and then drops us into some good old-fashioned combat, that gives us some glimpses at what we can expect from the future brawls. I AM HOOKEDonly thing I'm worried about is the harem aspect, I like harem... BUT not when everyone is in the harem. like it's fine for MC to like see, but when ever female character is there to either have, fantasize, or become a slave to sex, then it devalues the whole story.there's already the mom, sister, wolf, guard, and its only 14 chapters. sure those are just the ones he "loves" but let's be serious for a moment, it's not lookin so good. I hope this book does better on this front then the wolf one

The way the characters develop, the way the story is so detailed… If this doesn’t deserve to be a movie then nothing does! 🙌🏾🙌🏾 Disney needs to see this 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾

The book has a potential to be great. I love the twists and turns in the story . I can't wait for another chapter.  I recommend this book to those looking for fantasty books.

I really like this, this is best for short stories that we can read instantly and enjoy them in less time :> i rec u to read it                        

I quite liked this novel it is Interesting and our mc is not really op yet but Slowly Growing Type and has more Survival felling to him thx to his poor life  and struggling to get food on the table and so far the novel is quite nice whit a nice world build and some ligt itro to  Mec combat  and slice of life hear and ther =D    This novel remind me a bit about Legend of the Supreme SoldierBut Bit different character Personality though  but if you read Legend of the Supreme Soldier and liked it i Think you Might Like this one 2    and if this seems interesting check out the other novel in reverse lol so i really hope this get picked i really enjoyed reading it and it is quite Interesting and get you curious wear our mc will go next and what adventure will come to Him and his Friend/friends

Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?