Tough Love

Everyone needs a woman like Helena in their life, someone that provides Solace (chapter 11)

There are parts of the story that are well thought out and have a unique take on the cultivation shstem that differs from other stories. And i have no issue with them being able to fight stronger people, but at times it they can utterly destroy someone nearing the peak of a realm, but then a few days later absolutely struggle to fight someone at the same power. I haven’t read with the updates, as in keeping up with chapter releases. But reading through at once, it feels like the story is rushed and isn’t fully developed. A lot of things aren’t really explained or given background. It also seems that over 80% of females in this story look absolutely the same except hair/eye color.I know this sounds like i despise the story, but i truly don’t. I think the setting and the story itself are good, but a lot of potential is missed out on and lack of variety/creativity in characters. i.e. busty women with big butt… literally all of them and given the same body description.

Is this the original author or did someone just copied it from Royal Road or scribblehub where author posted it till 110 chapters...............

I just read to the currently last accessible chapter with fast passes (chapter 170). It is noticeable that the author is an amateur author. But not in a bad way. Most things are top notch. It's just that things are not always fleshed out like in the stories of the really good authors and some strategies are a bit linear, especially in the beginning. But generally speaking this is a great story, playing in a great setting and the characters are better than anything I could write. Also the author respond to some comments. That's always a plus.

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i wanna read more, it seems like a good story.the chars are really good so far.i've read much worse on here.give it ago its worth a read.

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Sany loosened her grip around the rods, and they fell to the floor with an echoing clatter. Her shoulders slumped. "You mean I'll have to carry him."