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Jeinny23
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- July 1,2024
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it's so nice have a lot of potential, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work.
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I like the start ...especially how you show the thread power...
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I’m already on Chapter 5, and I wanted to leave a review!This is my first time reading a story about cultivation with a Chinese theme/characters, and I’m really enjoying it so far.The pacing of each chapter is great, and the character/world-building is well done and interesting. I just have a bit of trouble understanding some of the details about the power system. Hehehe, maybe I’m just a bit slow, sorry! :VSo if you’re planning to read this story, I’m sure you’ll enjoy it! If you’re into cultivation and transmigration stories, you must give this one a try!
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The hero's son is monster, the mc is.....
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This one is a good novel but please work on update stability. I really enjoy it.
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I love it so far. I do gotta say though. I feel like there could be a little (albiet fake or not) more romance involved if it's going to be in the romance genre. While, I do get the main genre idea, I feel like it could do with a little more. Aside from that. 4/5 stars. Great read.
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Hey guys author here,I don't have much experience in writing and im just 17 still in highschool. So if there are any problems or corrections that needs to be done feel free to comment.
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hey y'all, author here, this is my first work here, I am pretty sure I made a lot of mistakes, but I am trying to make it as good as possible. I like how this story is coming up. I like reading it as much as writing it. Thank you for giving it a chance. If you have any suggestions I would love to hear them.
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Kael system is very complex I can't understand it completely
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Wow. Just wow. What the hell did I read?!? Everything about it is good, but why does it have to be good? I want to throw shade but I just can't.Good job to the author for making a great piece, looking forward to more chapters in the future!
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Keep it up your creation is a master piece just like watching a real move
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Condensed: The Craned Wing Admiral