I swear I'm not just saying this because I wrote it, but this book is honestly amazing. The plot is full of surprises, and the endings are anything but predictable. So... um... please give it a read.

Nice PlotExcellent Word Structure The Novel Got Me Hooked 😀

😂 fairly original book, we discover the causes that made the MC as well

The pacing is perfect - it's like a rollercoaster ride of emotions

Keep up the good work, I'm always waiting 🥰

Its good to see new people trying their hands at writting. Its even good when those people are your friends... keep the good work Buba! Lets see what your story will become...

Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good.Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents.Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement.World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential.Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

this is so unique and funny, my first time reading this genre of novel! will be waiting for the new chapters 😗🪄🤭

hmm..interesting...very very interesting

This novel is a masterpiece know why:MC is a villain , no anti-hero,no good soul who is becoming villain for good,not a hero he is just a fucking villain.He is HimThat's we want and we get.Highly recommended.

I Feel Like Screaming, Why Did You Run Serena! but Meh, I'll Just Be Patient. this is a good story, and I'm eager to dig deeper.