Seduction Overlord: Conquering mature beauties

I won't complain about the spellings and all, overall matter is the story is hilarious .Continue with your stories. I can't wait for more.😁😁🔥

There is a trial Gaming novel the same as this months ago, it was about Pubg this novel has less controlling system, lets the host do whatever he wants in his daily life and doesn’t simp for a Girl. but this gaming novel about LoL i thought its going to be better but it is so disappointing First or second chapter it immediately wants to Vegtable the host when he wants to reject it, The system controlls his love life, and such. He got a very contRolling sYstem and He a simp thats i wanna say.

First thing, I love to applaud you with the concept. For me, it's new, unusual and I never heard of it before. The thing about sci-fictions today are the ideas seemed identical so reading your novel was refreshing to me. Another is I love how you already put distinctive traits for each character you presented which makes us readers easier to differentiate with them and note them individually. And what I like the most is how you lay the events perfectly that lead to string age. It helped put depth, add mystery and stir my curiosity. What I'd kindly suggest is apply flashback rather than descriptive explanation of the past(though, it's up to you especially if that's just your style) because I personally think it has more feels. Nonetheless, I had no problem with grammar or mechanics because I honestly didn't see errors on those. Ultimately, kudos! I really admire sci-fi writers because I believe they had the hardest time. Anyway, keep the fire in you burning!

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A must read book!! I love the pics author had attached in between, it helps clear the understanding better. Cecily is beautiful beyond words, but arrogant at the same time. Author has truly succeeded in creating a fascinating world background!! Guys do give it a read!!🙌🤗

The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character. Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter.The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.

Well this is surely an interesting SYPNOSIS which caught my 👀!! So an early 5 stars as motivation ....will give a proper review after READING atleast 60 chaps

Fang Rou also didn't mind as she only ever got presents from her parents. When she had birthdays before this, they would give her something she wanted or take her somewhere nice.