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SwindlerQxf
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Okay this is my review!World Building: I think this is an aspect that was his strength and pretty much well planned. By far it was okay and was well established.Pacing: It was slow but fine. Well tuned up and Narration was fun and funny sometimes.Writing quality: Grammar is fine but there are typos here and there. Needed to be rechecked as it destroys the flow. Also synopsis needs to be reworked. Strengths: Story, Plot, World building, NarrationWeakness: Grammar, typos, Synopsis
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the author made another Great story as always cheering up!
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Loved your story! How's your book doing? Are readers engaging with it?I'd love to share some valuable insights on how to boost your book your book's performance You can Dm me on Instagram (azeedali01) or Discord (aliazeed) for better discussion
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Only 9 chapters but I think for a new book it's a good start. The synopsis is really good and I love the revenge plot of this story. More chapters and kudos! 🎉🎉🎉
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this story has amazing potential. Unfortunately, I couldn't even reach chapter 10 due to how jarring it is to read. There are so many grammatical issues; it's honestly surprising how many people have stuck around to read. if anything, though, it proves how much potential this novel has. I encourage the author to take the time and edit his chapters more carefully. good luck. I'll check in on this book in a month or two. If the Grammer improves, so will my review.
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Hey great author Have read your book and it's really amazing but I would like to share you some tips on how to grow your book performance
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Story is slow paced. One chapter daily is not acceptable. Even chapter is not that long. I love the storyline. Requesting the author to publish more or longer chapters. Thank you.
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when i read the first chapter i almost thought this was a story about the demon world looking upon us - about Covid and man made lab leaked viruses. only a few chapters are released maybe the plot will become clear by then. good luck on the novel
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The story follows the main character, a vanilla hero with the ability to bring back dead humans. With the help of a crab that can purify the humans that had been turned to monsters due to the apocalypse, and a goal of 1million humans brought back alive, he embarks on a journey of survival, kingdom building, and war to preserve the hope of humanity and being them back from the brink of extinction. A great novel so far and I am hoping to see many more chapters soon! Keep up the great work!
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This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked.While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!
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Wow, nice novel. The story is really amazing. I love it.
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you haven't gone far but I already love the book
Unfortunately Misfortuned