Ah, lust, that age-old sin that men (and women) can't seem to stop. Now, if you're an avid follower of me, you'll know that I would never recommend this to anyone due to the evil nature inside these pages. Ya know: devils, sacrifices, and rituals. Notwithstanding, Zexusgo seems to wish to refine their writing craft. Let's see if we can give him pointers.So the story takes place in this fantasy world that centers on betrayal, transformation, and some survival. Zexusgo employs LITRPG mechanics, so it's clear where this story is headed.Ishar (the MC) is basically sacrificed to a devil (Satanic) by his comrades, which is where his journey begins. Zexusgo does a great job pacing things; we'll give him that. I think it's due to the LITRPG aspect because his action scenes are interesting enough to understand.Do we like Ishar? Heck no. Haha. He's a little complex that struggles too much after transforming. That's good, though, because it allows readers to understand him more. I favour Kael more. That or Rudrik. So you better not slack off on them, Zexusgo.Here are the things to improve on: explaining the LITRPG system so readers aren't lost on Ishar's ability sets, a better background to understand why Ishar was betrayed, and better dialogue (since they seem forced).This is Akito, hoping those who are lost may come to Jesus Christ as their Lord and Saviour.

looks promising hopefully it's keeps my attention because the synopsis is good 👍

Shameless Author Review – A Totally Unbiased OpinionWelcome, dear reader! You’ve just stumbled upon the greatest novel of all time. No, really. If there were an award for Peak Literature, I’d have already rigged—I mean, won it.The plot? Flawless. The characters? Deeper than the ocean. The world-building? So immersive you might forget reality exists.As for updates… Well, let’s just say I’m creatively unpredictable (totally not lazy).So what are you waiting for? Read now and witness greatness! Or don’t—but then you’ll miss out on history in the making. Your choice.

A very good story it feel like a good sherlock type story but more darker and more thrilling keep up your writing .The character development was really good .The story started slow face and now its really a fast face one i really liked the change of the faces of story .

story is too fast paced maybe author need to tone down a  bit. the charectors devopment can be done well ..                                                                                                    ..

Good Job! The beginning is good. Try to continue the story and make more updates. The concept is interesting. Keep up the good work. Good luck!

i love this story is something that interesting and love the character building and the relationship between everyone and love love the world building.

now I gave it a try listening to the chapters to where you can check it out it's extremely long winded it's generic storyline that you see in a lot of other stories I'm not saying don't check it out you may like it but I don't see why we have whole chapters on what everybody in the area is thinking about this and that it's ridiculous considering we're having to pay for these chapters on these books you figure they'd have a little more to do with this actual storyline

As expected you did a great novel hun. Update more chapters and don't leave us hanging. The chapters made me cringe and I wanna see how she slapped her scumbag husband and bitch twin sister!

yep, time to review. Not many chapters have been uploaded yet, but I already have feeling that the world building will be great. Continue author 🔥🔥🔥

Having almost 100 chs with just 2 reviews?Then i will be the 3rd.Author said there will be no Yuri, and i feel this will be a good novel.Don’t disappoint bro 👊

😌What can I say? I was filled with surprises, the way the author mixes adult themes and comedy is amazing.But why does Leo think he is in a p13, come one🙃he is doing it right?