The Vampire's Desire

Honestly, anything is better than the other 3 currently listed...The voting system really needs the votes to be reset each week so we don't get stuck with last week's 2nd best every following week...

I hope this novel will enter the top ranking fasttttt, OP MC, and it looks like there's no harem too, what else do you want to expect from this? Btw, how did I find this novel? Lol, I was just scrolling casually in my boredom, then I unexpectedly found it.

only read 20 chap but it got the potential to be a great storyand those who says its harem genre and thats y its bad or says i dont like it so dont read this just stop acting tough and knowledge able like your are some kind of great artist or something. and at last i like the story so i read it if dont like it so i droped it but make laugh at writer , translator . or owner.

I believe this is a great story. But There is this long stretch after the initial struggle of cementing himself as the top player where stuff just fell in his lap because "Plot". personally i don't like that kind of writing because instead of it seeming like "A convenient misunderstanding" it ends up feeling like everyone else is dumb and then that takes me out of the emersion of the story. It made me stop caring about the main character as at a point I knew that everything was just going to fall into his lap anyway. It became so predictable that I could skip dozens of chapters and I didn't feel like i missed a thing. I actually became more interested in the side character interactions than the main character himself. Sometimes failures make the main character more interesting and makes the story less predictable. He doesn't have to win everything.  Failing in a few minor events and a couple major events brings life to a character, especially when it is a failure that I was rooting for him to succeed but didn't despite trying his hardest. then learning from that important failure and moving forward. unreasonably making everything drop into their lap kind of makes the character boring. After a while the tension in the story was no longer there. I personally think you should have kept Cervantes as a rival to Leo way longer than you did. I also think that you should have used the ChaosBringer as another rival to the MC. As it stands he wasn't a very flushed out character. From the beginning of his introduction he felt like a character that was just there to pass the reigns of the uprising to Leo. It would have made the middle of the story way more interesting in my opinion. As there would have at least been some tension and a threat to Leo's life. A 4 way struggle between chaos, Cervantes, Leo and the demon king. With pink lotus coming in later to disrupt the natural order.  Instead everything fell into his lap in predictable fashion. it became the predictable OP,super lucky, MC troupe.despite all of the criticism I wrote this was definitely one of the more well written novels I have read. You still did an excellent job writing it. I can't write like this so I still think you write better than the vast majority.

Fun lazy mc slow life so far I like                                                                                                         

I absolutely love this stories slow world building! Please please please keep going!!!! I also really loved how real and smart the characters are. Tackling problems very logically.

Damm, I thought I was going home.

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