This story is my first. I tried something like this for first time. Please review this story and please support for future

The problem I have with this novel is that everything is too hunky-dory for the MC. He's handsome, talented, rich AF and has a rich untalented starkid girlfriend. There's hardly any room for growth, it's a wish-fulfilment story. Everyone loves an underdog story. Perhaps, if he started out as a failure or as the struggling son of a celebrated cricketer, the readers would root for him more. There's no suspense or plot that leaves you nail biting, every chapter you know the MC's going to win like a Boss. Not telling you how you should write, I don't have that authority. There are hardly any novels on this platform on cricket, and I was excited when I found this.

it's another good wolf novel, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work hoping for the next chapters.

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it been a great read so far hopes it maintains it interest factor

First off, this book is different. it's not your typical fantasy and I love and appreciate it. the first two chapters got me as a Christian. no offense to other religions tho but author I salute your knowledge of the bible

You have some very well defined characters, even the ones we don’t know very well yet and humor sprinkled in all the right places💜 watch out for Mr Swordsman!!!!

Some rich world building. The pacing can be faster. I am still waiting to find out what happened to Josh. Not really interested in Alena. Kalli sounds like a cool character, I will be rooting for her. Good luck for next volume

The world building is quite amazing and also the story telling.

‘S pretty good.Man used to be a borderline eunuch, now he isn’t lol, pretty much it. Why does this review have to be so long man blah blah blah ok finished

JUUUUST WOOOOOOOOOOOOW! How it's started, and the tragic ending it's kinda touching! Keep going!!!! We want a new chapter, we're waiting for it!

@ShadowBane Your second chapter of this Novel isnt Translated..... I didnt read far, but i hope there arent anymore of these Non-Translated Chapter......