TheAssassin&TheKnight By SkyCain

The yaoi vibes clash with the tags that are claiming an R-18 Harem. The protag is dumb and the plot is ridiculous. Filled with unnatural cliche moments that immediately break you out of the story.At one point some random rich dude that has his figure explained in detail is flirting with the protag in a cab after he stole it. Now that does nothing for me as a straight man secure in my sexuality, I don't care if a character is that way, but at the same time, I'm looking at the tags confused about how I got to this point. Know what I mean? The author said it was supposed to be funny. This was just one of the events like that.Then there are the over-the-top cliches. The phone thing was where I dropped it. I'm not gonna bother going into them though. Just don't waste your time if you're bothered by any of this. Do not go in expecting the plot to move towards what the tags claim anytime soon. It's very boring even if you ignore what I've pointed out.

It ok if your new to the genre but i have seen all the story plots the author uses,Few new unfortunately, The power gain system seems unique And world building is a strong point but the arcs I have definitely “been through before”  (all in all, if get me out of my own reality I’d say it did the job fine) - Poorly educated American

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Writing quality alrightStory Development is underdevelopedCharacter Design is undersignedUpdating stability is meh considering this novel won't have a chance for continuationWorld Background is average. Nothing special about it. Like every other cultivation world Background there is.

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Overall from what published so far this is really well written. It reflects really well how addictive some games can be. I really hope that this will continue to be updated sometime in the future.

While skimming through other reviews, what surprised me the most was how generous they were with their praise.Apart from the protagonist, none of the other characters seem to matter. They are templates, not characters, and their interactions seem like conversations between AI assistants. The system has a decent design, but the world background is horrendous. Wars, trade and organisations are all dealt with haphazardly, with no sense of immersion or realism whatsoever. Honestly not worth anyone's precious time.