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I enjoyed reading your chapters. It has so much potential. The plot of the story was so interesting and engaging.Pls keep writing and Do not stop bringing interesting story to your audience.

The book is pretty good. The start was above average, OP MC might not be for everyone but the author handled it right at the beginning . The characters, main and side, started developing nicely. The story line was good too, plenty of mystery and story lines to keep you

Hell yeahhhhh. I'm soo excited that this is getting picked. I've been waiting for months now. Also for those who are complaining, when trial read was introduced webnovel said that it might bring back the novels that didn't get picked before. So please stop rating it low just because this was picked. Cuz there are many including me who are waiting with hope that trial novels which didn't get picked before get picked.Also above thing isn't the reason I rated this 5. It's because I freaking love this novel. Do give this novel a try if you like iras kinda troupe with no racism bs but with video games.I'm really sorry for my grammar guys. I'm pretty sure I fked it up badly.

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An awesome and refreshing novel, this will eventually hit top 20 if the author is consistent.  Ahhdhdjcjekkansndjkckxmwmwnenjdjdndjrjdjdidiejwjencjj*** fmdksjsndnjdjsmsmsmsjkckckvkcmemsndjjckcjejsjsjsjjdncncncjcjdnsjsjs

Here are my thoughts for this novel based on what I read so far:World Building: So far the world building is okay as the author give some situational description. However, the author can expand more about the demon world or even the world itself in the next chapter to make it more engaging to explore.Character: so far the character is fine I guess and the main character is okay as he have some kind of sarcastic personality. Therefore,  there will be an interesting development in future chapters.Overall, it's quite decent road for the reincarnation and I do believe can expand more about the world and the character itself. Therefore, keep up the good work

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I suggest others to read this piece of novel. This shows premise. Although lacking compared to Lin Huang's world, it might come to that level somehow in the near future. The only problem I think it has is the updates. Well we can't be so demanding as readers for everyone experiences road blocks somehow and somewhen but you might tell us through a chapter or somehow in an author note. Aside from updates, keep doing a great job! Sun Wukong out!! (Clones out)