Well written, excited to see where this goes.

Either an AI wrote this or a person with adhd. Some much descriptions and it feels like I’m reading a whole bunch of jumble . The story quite literally makes 0 sense.

Weldone autor keep it up👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 sarangayor 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💐💐💐💐💐💕💕💕💕💖💕💖💕💕💖💖💖💕💕

wow! I already love it and I'm only on chapter 2!

hello author here some part of this new book is refined because last book got rejected again hope you enjoy it for now I'll upload 2 chapter every day :)

Chapters read: 42I thought mixing mage concepts with cultivation was interesting, but things got a bit confusing to me. I did feel the antagonization of the MC was a bit forced with some of the characters. There didn't seem to be any background information as to what MC possibly did to them to merit that hatred lol aside from Raiden, the hatred of others seems a little out of place. That's just what I think, but I know someone can hate you for no reason too. So perhaps it's reasonable?? I thought the story was okay, neither great nor terrible.

Nice story can’t wait for your next chapters

Good! Better than most of the novels I read here! Keep going and make sure each supporting character gets their shine

The few chapters at the start are quite slow-paced, but after that, the fun of the story begins. Also, I like to applaud the author for using first-person POV in writing the story. It really highlights the MC's personality.

This book is so captivating already and I love the main character can’t wait too see what happens next 😍😍😍

Interesting storyline. Like how the characters are brought together. However, I am confused regarding Yukon’s gender as has been referred to as she/he/him/her interchangeably throughout the chapters.

looking forward for the family drama that is about to happen