Konoha: Uchiha On A Big Voyage

Love this fast pace novel. He tells the important things but you don't have the feeling something is missing. I don't like the novels where you read how beautiful that girl is for 3/4 of the chapter. No one's cares about that. If he gets a little 18+ action with her  than it's OK but the crap that literally every girl is a fucking "beauty" is annoying me.If you like an overpowered Mc who destroys everything than this novel is perfect for you

Character is the worst. I don't recommend reading this book.  You may feel irritated towards it.,..............................................

heyo crazy cronie here,review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211(released chap till date: 219)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionSHORT REVIEW: A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy.LONG REVIEW: writing: 9/10 Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob. update: 10+2/10 Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7plot: 7/10 ^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.)^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~ I mean *spoiler* it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple. *spoiler end* ^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any ideaI mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler* about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest.*spoiler end* ...characters: 8.5/10 Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good.pacing: 9/10 ^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this... ^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opiniondialogues: 9.5/10 Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel.entertainment: 9/10 Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed...Overall: 4.5/5 CC rants:-^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed.^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~It's high time we have a disciple xD... ^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm.... ^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness..^ And well... nothing else keep updating 🌚CONCLUSION:This is one of my weekly pastime... I just stack chaps to read it every weekend...And a must read if you're into SOL type novels...I'll say it once again; there is no romance, harem so to all suckers for this genre stay away... (I'm a sucker for harem and this is one of the few novels I'm reading which doesn't have harem)

Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters.Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km)After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change.Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met.Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know.Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read)SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!)Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way)Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities)World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained)P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify.It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants.Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do?It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions.Have a nice day everyone!

So far this seems like model world creator or whatever that one's called, however I'm still enjoying this so far. No grammar mistakes I spotted, but I don't care for those. I just want him to not Instantly become friends with everyone now that his power is good. Everyone laughed at him and personally I dislike the MC going straight back to them when he gets power... in my opinion he should teach em a lesson or something... Just a thought, thanks again.

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The MC is so stupid it makes me seem like a genius. He doesn't eve acknowledge the fact that he is in another world, he is very slow and keeps apologising to pre-recorded messages and to things that are just exp bags.