Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

I am not a fan of romance novels but this book captivated me, it truly deserves the five star rating, the grammar, Character design and storyline were splendid, keep up the good work author.

Amazing and well written story, MC op and great, your style is unique, attract readers for more reading already 4 chapters, makes me want to read more,

Hey Author hereThe Fated Rival of the Moon" 40 chapters are completed as of now of review this is my first time writing a novel. If you have any questions about the story please ask and this novel focuses more on Action and World.If you want to know anything about the novel please ask.

Thank you guys for your support we cross 50 collections on webnovel, It is my first work it has many flaws but i tried by very best some of the chapter is genarated most of them i will update , i hope you guys give suggestions if needed .

Author here! Of course, I’m giving myself 5 stars—after all, it’s my creation! But I’d love to hear your thoughts and feedback. Let me know what you think, and if you enjoy the story, please feel free to leave a review!

It's certainly very well written, with a nicely established world background. There are a few grammatical errors, but the meaning gets across well enough. The proceedings are interesting, with a sustained tension, and the schemes and machinations involved are fun to read.I personally liked how a seemingly desperate situation was gradually overturned, all due to the efforts of the protagonist. The trials were also constructed well, making them seem like an important event, rather than a random examination that could have been covered in a chapter or two, as most hunter exams in novels tend to be. So many chapters spent covering hunter exams should normally be a negative, but in this case, it is quite the opposite.However, the character designs could have been handled better. For some reason, the author chooses to give sexual undertones to every interaction the protagonist has with a woman. They are always flirtatious in nature, with the protagonist reciprocating to a certain extent. Emotional infidelity is a complex topic, but I'm sure most would agree when I say that it's not fair to his wife. The male characters introduced are almost always either eccentric and mysterious, or simply irritating in his perception. It is a repetitive setup in this sense.This work hasn't been updated in a while, so I'm not sure whether it'll be continued, but the available chapters finished on a real high note. It undeniably arouses my curiosity, and I've been left with the feeling of wanting more.

The atmosphere and detailed description of Eryndor filled me with chills. Caelum is a captivating protagonist, and the action with the arrival of ___ ______ (to not spoil) left me breathless. The Rowan full of mystery, makes me eager for the next chapters. I can't wait to see how Caelum will keep evolving and what fate has in store for him and Rowan! By the way, Caelum is the main protagonist, right? Sometimes Rowan is more 3D than him.

The story’s mystery and the dynamic between the two main characters are so unique and full of potential—it really pulls you in. The opening chapters hooked me right away, and I’m genuinely excited to see where the author takes it.  I just hope the updates stay consistent because this feels like a gem in the making. Definitely worth checking out if you’re into something fresh and intriguing!

Author's Note:I just wanted to take a moment to address you, the reader, before you dive into the story. This isn’t just a warning; it’s a heads-up. If you find yourself sensitive to certain topics or are easily offended, I would advise you to think twice before continuing. My book touches on matters that may be unsettling to some, and I don't shy away from exploring those darker, more complex aspects of life.Now, if you’re expecting a typical “good guy” as my main character, this might not be the book for you either. My protagonist is far from perfect—he’s deeply flawed, driven by ambition, and doesn't always make the choices you might root for. He’s not a hero in the traditional sense, and he won’t be a knight in shining armor. He’s human, which means he’ll show emotions from anger to happiness and everything in between.So, if you’re looking for a robot of a character who doesn’t feel anything, then you may want to move on. But if you’re open to exploring a complex, driven individual who’ll stop at nothing to achieve his goals—no matter the cost—then you’ve come to the right place.Thank you for picking up the book. I hope you enjoy the journey, but please, approach with caution.

An ambitious and gripping story with a rich supernatural world and compelling central conflict. With deeper exploration of characters, pacing adjustments, and expanded themes, this novel has the potential to be a standout in the urban/dark fantasy genre.

the entire first part with his family? trash like totally weird... BUT...Dun dundun it picks up and now it's not just readable its awesome... to those who read shattered innocence and survived the first 50 ch I'm telling u to do the same for this one