Sovereign of Fractured Realms

Excellent world building, scheming and emotional understanding

Netotare, that word should be enough for most readers to know why they shouldn't read this. I was interested in the novel at first, but it started showing signs of NTR, and then it just threw it all out onto us ( within first 50 chapters ). Quite disappointed

A relatively decent mc is being thrown together with the two most annoying women I think I've ever encountered in a cultivation novel... Author, why the **** would you do this to us? Do you actually think tsundere women are fun to encounter in novels? No sane person is going to like a hot girl, if that hot girl is a cunt or just generally annoying. Stop, seriously, please. Harem and Romance are the worst sections on any novel site, and it gets worse when harem/romance aren't the main genre. All the worst stories on here are the ones in which action is the main genre, but it has the harem/romance tags. Every new story which gets updated at least once a day and has harem or romance tags is undoubtedly the ****tiest story of that week. For the love of god can't you write the same story, but just rewrite it so that the Feng girls get genuinely avoided after meeting them. I mean I know it would drop the total chapter number from like 2000 to around 300, but it's not a bad thing for a story to actually end.

It said Wine Store??? Now MC has started to do the Cooking and Refining Pills also?? That's completely different from what it initially started from.

It started off really good, then it gets messed up when relationships get involved, I liked the 3 'sisters' (Tina, trish, sheila) didnt like maddie that's fine also.... the mc gets his head all foggy when these relationships get involved and it kind of gets off topic and the mc calm composure its basically gone (maybe he gets it back 467 he's basically bat**** right now though)

Translation Quality: PoorThe translator+'editor' combo can't even capitalize the names of players. On top of that, there are tons of notes either from author or translator mentioning stupid things such as: a quarter of an hour is equal to 15 minutes, 2nd tier is one tier less than 3rd tier, etc.. These things should be removed.Story Development: PoorI've read over 30 chapters in, and literally less than 45 minutes passed since he had entered into the game. Yes, I spent probably 2-4 times the amount of time reading 30 chapters than the minutes that passed by in-game.Here's a breakdown of how the story goes:2% plot8% comments made by MC saying "as I expected" or "as I predicted"30% reactions by the audience10% beta testers wondering how MC did XX thing, even though there's only one possible answer30% info dump and explanations of things20% repetition of the same explanation in twenty different waysCharacter Design: PoorThe only thing this MC knows how to say is "as I expected, ..." and "as I predicted, ..." He's supposedly some god-tier top 100 player, but in the beginning gets surprised by a level 5 city guard using a basic skill after being attacked. There are so many issues with the character design that it's too much effort to list them out.As for other characters go, the sister didn't seem to have too bad of a set-up, but I haven't read far enough to see whether the author will mess up her design or not.World Background: Average+Look, this is a stereotypical VRMMO reincarnation story. Essentially, just imagine ROTSSG with some elements changed. While there are quite a few ignorant and wrong statements made regarding the IRL world by the narrator, you just have to accept that most Chinese web novel authors have intelligence deficiency.I'm a fan of this genre so if there were more chapters I'd probably continue to drudge through this novel and keep nitpicking on it every few paragraphs (I felt like I wrote at least 5-6 comments per chapter.. new record).↓↓↓tl;dr: This novel is trash. The only thing you'll get out of it is being annoyed about how slow the pacing is, and the endless info dumps. Seriously, you'd think they would end by chapter 10 or 15! Nope, this author has managed a new record, info dumping for 32 chapters straight. I'm going to go out on a (very short) limb here and say that they will continue doing so for the next few hundred chapters. This is very clearly their writing 'style,' if it can be called that.

This deserves a lot of attention, I enjoyed reading this and the great pacing of the story. I was able to get a lot from one chapter and wish to see more! Good work!

I am such a big fan so far!!!! I cannot wait to hear what happens next. I’m so intrigued as to who the mysterious “I” character is that we keep getting small glimpses of!!! The writing could use some work and it is clear that the author is new, but so far I am loving how unique and LGBtQ friendly the story is.